You looked into my soul and saw,
who I really was and could be
So much potential and love to give
And you were the one that had eyes to see
-that there was strength in my soul
and you took what was broken and made it whole
My love amplifies because of you everyday
The beginning of my life didn't take it's toll
-that there was pain in my soul
and you carefully mended and cared
It's been so long since I've been hurt
I can say it's because of you I've been spared
God sent me an angel and it is you.
And after eighteen years you still hypnotize
I'm so happy to wake up next to you each morn'.
And you still look at me with love in your eyes
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 12th, 2018 07:18
- Comment from author about the poem: Getting ready for Valentine\\\'s Day. And playing around with format.
- Category: Love
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Comments7
Oh this is a stunning Valentine message Christina - - your words of love and grateful affection flow like sweet honey - he will treasure this I am sure.
I hope so! Thank you so much Fay for the read--truly appreciated!
Super loving write.
Thanks so much GF!!
A beautiful message for your love, Christina! I enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
Thank you, I do appreciate it!
Lovely work - I'm still in love with my wife, and she me, after 54 years of marriage - must write a piece for her - now see what you've done. Lol 🙂
Yes, lol!! I'm glad to inspire you! I appreciate the read so much!! Glad to see you are still so in love.
This is such a beautiful and heartwarming write Christina!
Thank you Skye! Appreciate it!
Thanks for caring & sharing CHRIS ~ This is beautiful and "Sweet as Honey" as FAY has indicated. 18 years is a long time so you mist have found TRUE LOVE which is what we all hope & pray for ! If this is a draft can't wait for WEDNESDAY ! Hugs in the Spirit ~ Hermano tuo BRIAN @@@@@@@
Thank you so much Brian! Yes, I will post my Vday post in the morning. I have found true love indeed. Appreciate the reply!
Beautifully written, Christina! Am not so sure though of which one of you is the luckier one. Looks like a draw to me!
I would say it is a draw! I appreciate your wonderful comment!
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