Love was sneaking up on her
Like daybreak sneaks up on night
She felt attraction somewhere
But failed to see the light
Her mind was occupied and full
No room for any other thought
But deep inside she felt a pull
A bit like she was caught
Resolutely pushing it all away
Concentrating on what she had to do
She went ahead her usual way
Through the day without a clue
But love can never be denied
No matter what you try to do
You can run or you can hide
No matter, love will get you too
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Author:
Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A lighter look at love. We don't have to be all serious all the time.
- Category: Love
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Yes Fred, love can never be disguised or denied.
Thanks Goldie! I wanted this one to be on the lighter side, yet still contain a 'fundamental truth'! 🙂
fred, i love this ! i love the mention of daybreak sneaking up on night, being caught, and i love the ending line.. '' you can run or you can hide , no matter, love will get to you '' ha ha and thats so true! thanks for sharing , i loved this
Thanks so much Charlotte, for this very kind comment! And you know what? Love will get you when you least expect it! 🙂
A fine write Fred. But of course, none of this applies to me and KP. We're always fighting like cat and dog! heehee.
Remember orchie, when God made Adam and put him into paradise, he looked down on him and saw how much fun Adam had. So God thought I have to do something to reign him in a bit, so he made woman.
Great piece of light verse Fred - It certainly crept up on me many many years ago - or rather it grabbed me without me even realising it.
Michael, both you and I know that we are the lucky ones! My best regards to Jeanne.
Someone who can make you laugh is the best catch of all!
Thanks Lorna, you are absolutely right!
Love can never obsoleted!
Thanks MR, you are absolutely right!
I feel it in my fingers
I feel it in my toes
Love is all around me
And the feeling grows ......
YES indeed FRED
LOVE is all around us
And in my experience it is
a FIRE that can never be
EXTINGUISHED ~ AMEN !
Yours ~ BRIAN
Thank you Brian! But careful, that fire can burn you too!!!
Love means to be accepted and embraced.
Thank you m&m, true, real love will accept the other one just the way he/she is.
Oh so true, sooner or later it'll come calling. Nice one.
Thank you da, and when it comes, you better be ready for it!
Fred,
A great write! When
Cupid is determined to shoot that arrow, it will get us no matter what!💘
Loved the read!
~Laura~
Thank you Laura, I am sure Cupid would win an Olympic Goldmedal in bow and arrow competition! 🙂
That’s for sure!😉
I like it a lot Fred! A lot of truth to it. A wonderful poem!
Thank you Christina! It started out as something light, but I guess there is some fundamental truth here.
Love the imagery you use in this confession of love's captive hold - great read Fred.
Thank you so much Fay, glad you liked this little poem about the tenacity of love.
Light and lovely! I never minded getting "got" by the love bug. Even when there was pain it has always been worth it.
Thank you Heather! You know what they say: No pain, no gain! And you are right, it IS so worth it!!!
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