THE PATH

Michael Edwards

 

 

 

THE PATH 

 

Each corner of her life bore scars

but with subdued, unbending pride

within the gardens tumbling walls

she held the reins of government.

 

Yet with the habit of command

emotions borne in solitude

were cast in foreign dissonance;

she sought the lonely routes beyond

the kingdom of her wounded mind.

 

Though clad in armour of reserve,

with tears afresh and borne of hope

like showers of rain that fall in spring

with rectitude she found the path

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  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 19th, 2018 00:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem was inspired by one of the one liners which I posted yesterday - hope you like it.
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  • Goldfinch60

    Good write Michael, I only hope she finds the right path.

    • Michael Edwards

      Thanks Andy - My reply to Dusk below probably answers that if you care to take a butchers.

    • dusk arising

      Clever lady and clever you but may we yet see the maiden of number 3 yesterday arise onto our screens delightfully propelled toward her destiny with your eloquence sir?

      • Michael Edwards

        Thanks Dusk - how about another stanza something along the following lines:

        Without decline the path she found
        reached out forebearingly to him
        and caring not for solitude
        she yielded to his outstretched arms.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks MICHEAL ~ love the painting ~ I stayed in cottages like that ~ In WALES ~ as a child ! Love the poem a great tribute to THERESA MAY ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem 'n Pic ~ Perhaps KINCAID could paint like that ?

        • Michael Edwards

          Cheers Brian. Not sure Kincaid could paint in such a loose style but it would be nice if he could. He is somewhat derided in most art circles as being too presact and twee but it's whatever floats your boat I guess.

        • orchidee

          A fine write and pic Michael. Who is Rectitude? Will he/she help me find the path too? (I wish I would shut up. lol).

          • Michael Edwards

            He's Apti's brother - haven't you met the Tudes Orchi ?

            • orchidee

              Are they a large family, the Tudes? I heard of Miss Sue E. Side but didn't fancy meeting her!

              • Michael Edwards

                She used to be friends with Lucy Lastic till she let her down.

                • orchidee

                  You know Joe Bloggs? Dunno if he is related to anyone here?

                  • Michael Edwards

                    Yes I know him - he went out with Eilean Dover - she's the one who fell off the cliff.

                  • FredPeyer

                    What is amazing is not only this poem, but when you say you will do something you go out and do it!
                    Great work, Michael!

                    • Michael Edwards

                      Doesn't happen often Fred - just lucky I had a bit of time available - thanks as always for the encouragement.

                    • Laura🌻

                      Loved it, Michael!
                      INSPIRATION served you
                      well I see! She found her
                      path...and slowly, so am I!
                      Awesome last stanza!
                      Of course, your painting
                      is beautiful! It reminds me
                      of a lovely Bed&Breakfast
                      place by a lake that I've
                      had the pleasure to stay at!

                      ~Laura~

                      • Michael Edwards

                        Thanks Laura - dedicated to you.

                        • Laura🌻

                          Aww...Thank you! So very
                          sweet of you! Of course, it’s
                          been saved in my faves AND printed out. Going
                          right into my special momento gift box!❤️
                          Enjoy your day, my friend! 😊



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