Suchness.
Living at heart's core,
suchness is love that all
unwanted emotion is freed
from the fear of tearful control.
Looking at love's core,
suchness is heart that all
vision becomes ecstatic and
forgiveness melts veils of mist.
Loving at heart's core
suchness is spirit that all
life sings with transcendent
light and soul weeps no more.
- Author: Fay Slimm. ( Offline)
- Published: February 19th, 2018 06:52
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 45
- Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
Comments9
lovely fay 🙂
Am glad you liked the read Charlotte - -- love is a subject which demands attention and poets of all ages have tried to express its various qualities.Thank you for the comment my friend.
Beautifully written and superb construction - a work of poetic art.
Ah - thank you so much Michael - your comments never fail to upbuild all other poets here.
Quite lovely. If you have achieved such then it must be blissful. I'm sadly lagging for parts of love still generate tears in me (and i don't just refer to romantic love here)
We are all merely trying to achieve the perfection of spirit dear friend and words to remind us are frequently needed - - thank you for your honest and caring comment D,.A.
SUCH LOVE ~ White as the driven snow
SUCH LOVE ~ I & Angela know
SUCH LOVE ~ Down through the years I show
O FAY ~ SUCH LOVE !
As your perfect poem reminds us:
No Fear ~ Forgiveness ~ No Weeping
Thanks FAY for caring & Sharing
Your Forever Friend ~ BRIAN
So pleased the words of the verse inspired you to eloquence dear Brian - - perfection of love and spirit is what we all try for while here on earth. Thank you for your perceptive input.
Love the whole poem, Fay, but that last stanza is pure magic and delight!
Am thrilled that the last stanza spoke to your core most deeply dear Fred and thank you so much for sharing that with us.
SUCH a fine write Fay!
Thank you dear friend and pleased you enjoyed the read.
Faye,
a lovely piece of reflecting your soul, flowing with your heart
Michael 🙂
Yes dear Michael the words seemed to flow when I thought on the message contained in the quote - a deep subject but so pleased it appealed.
A beautiful and
loving write, my
dear Fay!
Stop and listen for a
moment. Appreciate
the love in your heart!
Such is the moment!
~Laura~
Beautiful write Fay.
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