FOG

Michael Edwards

 

 

FOG

 

Ambiguous veils of waning light

transcending luminosity,

descend, pervade and modulate.

 

Chromatic silvers coruscate

as ghostly apparitions dance

and gothic spires reach up unseen.

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 25th, 2018 02:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: Inspired by Monet's paintings of London in fog - the poem that is. The monotype inspired by Modigliani at another exhibition the other side of the river - the Thames that is,
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  • Users favorite of this poem: LaurašŸŒ»
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  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful write Michael.

  • orchidee

    A fine write M.Never knew there was so much in fog! Maybe because I could not SEE anything in the fog! heehee.
    You see me? *reaches to shelf for dictionary* And who is Chorus Kate? lol.

    • Michael Edwards

      Cheers Orchi - she's the one drinking the perry.

    • dusk arising

      You got the title wrong mate, this should be called dusks kitchen. We use a smoke alarm as an oven timer.

      • Michael Edwards

        Fog at dusk eh?. Cheers dusk

        • Lorna

          Sorry - jumping in because this was SUCH a funny comment! Laughing.......

          • Michael Edwards

            Jump in - dusks timer is still giving me a smile having just spatchcocked and spiced a chicken which is now in the oven.

          • FredPeyer

            Beautiful writing again, Michael. Makes me remember the foggy days in November in Zuerich. Don't have much fog here in Hawaii. Sometimes just a little bit hanging in the valleys in early morning.

            • Michael Edwards

              Thanks Fred - as I said above fog is okay - it's when it becomes smog that it becomes a pain.

              • FredPeyer

                No smog either, but sometimes we get vog (volcanic fog) when the south winds come from the Big Island of Hawaii and its active volcano. The usual wind direction is east to west.

              • Lorna

                Well Michael I have seen every Sherlock Holmes movie and Jack the Ripper and they are always moving through the "Impenetrable fog"........ it's actually amazing that it was reversed! It must have been a bit frightening! Oh and loved the verse!

                • Michael Edwards

                  I can recall as a child what we called pea soups which were so thick and settled in the lowland. In my early teens I actually earned money walking in front of cars with a torch to show them the way until they got out of a dip by a local river. Haven't seen the like for many a long year.

                  • Lorna

                    My goodness! What history! I can see you now!

                    • Michael Edwards

                      You couldn\'t then LOL

                      That was back in the 50s - the air is so much cleaner now and the River Thames is once again full of life and still improving year on year. Despite all this the atmosphere is still being dangerously polluted and there is so much we could do but ...!

                    • BRIAN & ANGELA

                      THANKS ANDY ~ As you know the real pea soup fogs of the 19th (Orchi will remember those !) and the 20th C have largely been abated ! What I love are the MISTS you get in Snowdonia ~ Scotland (Scottish Mist !) and the Lake District ~ if you are on the Hills you have to be guided by the ubiquitous CAIRNS ! It is only when you are in a FOG or a MIST that you fully appreciate BROTHER SUN ! Love the wording of the poem very KEATSIAN ! Yours BRIAN

                      • Michael Edwards

                        Cheers Brian - yes those lovely hanging mists which hover in the valleys are so mystical and romantic.

                      • LaurašŸŒ»

                        Michael,
                        The title reminded me of Carl Sandburgā€™s poem, ā€œFogā€. A required read in school!
                        Remembering his while reading yours, I see similarities and differences! Both excellent writes! Enjoyed the read!

                        ~Laura~

                        • Michael Edwards

                          Thanks for this - and to be compared with what must be an acclaimed work is quite something - but I must confess I don't know but I soon will.

                          • Michael Edwards

                            Just looked up Carl's poem and what a delight it is.

                            • LaurašŸŒ»

                              Yes, it is! Glad you looked it up!



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