Love's Glow.
The advent of love warms frozen soreness
in all stony hearts.
Its melt-down uncovers the edges of icy
unreadiness and
transforms cold into smiles more worthy
of receiving sweet
moments of yield as love's benign freedom
fans to high heated
flame that which once taken hold will never
again allow frosty
defeat to block out future reaching for bliss.
Experience the feel
of love's fateful kiss and give its fire a chance
to liquify previous snow
for love's glow needs nothing more than slow
stoking with gratitude's
coals for it knows those sparks of happiness
will warm wintery shock
as they roast away any petrified heart-chill.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: February 25th, 2018 05:04
- Comment from author about the poem: Written a while ago for a special friend in need of support when making decisions on love.
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Comments9
The SPANISH SAY "Amor esta Caliente y Piquante ! LOVE IS HOT & SPICY ~ AMEN ! That is my current experience
with ANGELA Hot in the sense of STEAMY and SPICY in the sense of experience ! For poeple in our Age group the unfolding of True Love is the SPICE of LIFE ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love the Picture ~ God indeed is the source of all LOVE ! Yours as ever BRIAN X
A lovely and welcome comment Brian - - thank you so much and glad you enjoyed the read.
I remember it well although it doesn't happen often! Lovely Fay.
Ah - - memory itself can resurrect love at times dear Lorna - thank you for the visit and comment.
The warmth of love that falls as salt on snow - Super Fay.
Such a tersely perceptive comment thanks so much Michael.
Thanks Fay - yes I might use it in a shortie.
Love has a tenacious will to grow when least expected Fay. And you've captured it quite well here in your poem. Beautiful!
You are so right A.P. - love can take such a firm hold and grow in a flash of unexpected happenings. Thank you for commenting.
A fine write Fay. A quote goes something like this: 'Nothing will get a coat off a man's back sooner than the warm sunshine!' Something like that anyway. Maybe it's from 'Confucius he say.....!'
The comment and quote brought me a smile dear Orchi - - indeed love can warm coats off backs quicker than sunshine at times. Thanks for the read and comment.
Oh yes, i can feel it creeping all over me already. Which is just as well for we are expecting a freeze up!
Ha ha - well there is nothing better than the heat of love to beat the freeze - thanks D.A. for commenting.
Love, fire, heat, warmth, glow....they all go together and you presented it in your usual eloquent way!
Thought this would appeal to your romantic side Fred - and yes all the warm tender meanings of love can bring glowing heat to the coldest of hearts - so pleased you enjoyed the read..
hi fay , a very nice read 🙂 i love your ideas here ,, the snow being a cold pain and the fire being warmth and love . nice how you used nature in this one, . truly enjoyed reading . x
Hi and thank you so much for the visit and read and for this perceptive comment - love can warm all cold places in hurt hearts and its glow will stay long after the initial feeling - so pleased you enjoyed the poem.
"Experience the feel
of love's fateful kiss and give its fire a chance
to liquify previous snow"
Beautiful lines Fay in a very good write.
Thank you Goldi and thank you more for posting your favourite lines - so pleased you liked the read.
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