Hope

Christina8

Sunny skies in February

Though the air stays cold

Heaven sent from frozen winter

Helps with ailments untold

 

I know I haven't seen

the very last snowflake

But the snow hills are melting

Just needed a pause for my sake

 

Not a cloud in the sky

Not one to be seen

And I can finally peek

and see that the grass is green!

 

When Hope shows herself

take notice and be pleased

Be thankful for all the things

and moments you have seized.

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 27th, 2018 13:04
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 42
  • Users favorite of this poem: LaurašŸŒ», poetboy123
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  • LaurašŸŒ»

    A beautiful write, Christina!
    Happy for the sunshine...
    even though itā€™s cold! Enjoy
    The sunshine ā˜€ļø

    ~Laura~

    • Christina8

      Thank you Laura! I appreciate the lovely comments. Pleased you added it as a fave! Loving the sunshine.

    • Michael Edwards

      Oh where has it gone? Snow all day although it was melting until quite late - great wrote Christina.

      • Christina8

        Thank you Michael. I appreciate it very much!

      • orchidee

        Good write Christina. You've probably got it worse than the UK.

        • Christina8

          Oh, for sure! Thanks so much orchidee!!

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          HI CHRIS ~ FAITH ~ HOPE ~ LOVE ! On MPS we get a lot of Poems on LOVE ~ some about FAITH ~ but very few on HOPE ~ so this is a precious gem ! STANZA 1. Recognises the the COLD & SUN ~ in the Winter ~ both play their part in keeping us Healthy ! S 2. Chris knows her own climate ~ and that the SNOW does not end in February ! The Snowbirds ~ from the Northern States who escape to Florida in the Winter don't like to return 'til Easter ! S 3. YES Chris when we live in snowy climes it is always reassuring (and gives us HOPE) to see that the Grass is still Green when to SNOW eventually melts ! S 4. So in the Bleak Mid-Winter HOPE is seen in the SUN ~ the melting SNOW ~ the Green Grass ~ So Seize the Day ~ and thank GOD for the consistency of the Seasons in the UK & the USA ~ AMEN ! As usual in a CS Poem the Structure is perfect ! Four balanced Quatrains with a consistent xaxa xbxb etc rhyme pattern ! Thanks for sharing and giving us all HOPE ! Brotherly HUGS ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@

          • Christina8

            Thanks so much for your in depth reply to my poem! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your continued support and your friendship! Yes, we must seize the day when we have days like these---there are not many! At least not until Spring. Thanks again, Brian! Sisterly hugs--Christina

          • poetboy123

            A wonderful write, loved the metaphor!

            • Christina8

              Thank you so much poetboy and also thanks for saving as a fave! I appreciate it!

            • Goldfinch60

              Good write, Hope is there and will always be with you.

              • Christina8

                Thanks GF! I appreciate the read and words of encouragement!

              • myself and me

                Keep and save the hope. Wonderful writing.

                • Christina8

                  Thank you so much m&m! I appreciate it!



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