Sunny skies in February
Though the air stays cold
Heaven sent from frozen winter
Helps with ailments untold
I know I haven't seen
the very last snowflake
But the snow hills are melting
Just needed a pause for my sake
Not a cloud in the sky
Not one to be seen
And I can finally peek
and see that the grass is green!
When Hope shows herself
take notice and be pleased
Be thankful for all the things
and moments you have seized.
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
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A beautiful write, Christina!
Happy for the sunshine...
even though itās cold! Enjoy
The sunshine āļø
~Laura~
Thank you Laura! I appreciate the lovely comments. Pleased you added it as a fave! Loving the sunshine.
Oh where has it gone? Snow all day although it was melting until quite late - great wrote Christina.
Thank you Michael. I appreciate it very much!
Good write Christina. You've probably got it worse than the UK.
Oh, for sure! Thanks so much orchidee!!
HI CHRIS ~ FAITH ~ HOPE ~ LOVE ! On MPS we get a lot of Poems on LOVE ~ some about FAITH ~ but very few on HOPE ~ so this is a precious gem ! STANZA 1. Recognises the the COLD & SUN ~ in the Winter ~ both play their part in keeping us Healthy ! S 2. Chris knows her own climate ~ and that the SNOW does not end in February ! The Snowbirds ~ from the Northern States who escape to Florida in the Winter don't like to return 'til Easter ! S 3. YES Chris when we live in snowy climes it is always reassuring (and gives us HOPE) to see that the Grass is still Green when to SNOW eventually melts ! S 4. So in the Bleak Mid-Winter HOPE is seen in the SUN ~ the melting SNOW ~ the Green Grass ~ So Seize the Day ~ and thank GOD for the consistency of the Seasons in the UK & the USA ~ AMEN ! As usual in a CS Poem the Structure is perfect ! Four balanced Quatrains with a consistent xaxa xbxb etc rhyme pattern ! Thanks for sharing and giving us all HOPE ! Brotherly HUGS ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@
Thanks so much for your in depth reply to my poem! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your continued support and your friendship! Yes, we must seize the day when we have days like these---there are not many! At least not until Spring. Thanks again, Brian! Sisterly hugs--Christina
A wonderful write, loved the metaphor!
Thank you so much poetboy and also thanks for saving as a fave! I appreciate it!
Good write, Hope is there and will always be with you.
Thanks GF! I appreciate the read and words of encouragement!
Keep and save the hope. Wonderful writing.
Thank you so much m&m! I appreciate it!
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