Your voice is my heart
Do you understand?
I hear it and it pumps my will to live
I hear it and it speaks, not from without
But channels itself from the inside out
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Lorna (
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Wow, Lorna!
So powerful and
heartfelt! The words
demand to be heard
and the visual enhances
the plea! A great write!
~Laura~
Thanks Laura!
Great work Lorna
Thanks Michael!
Very good write.
Glad you liked Goldfinch!
A fine write Lorna. You mean the voice of my singing. Erm, it can apply here, if adjusted:
* You hear it (you hear me singing) and it causes you to lose the will to live
* You hear it screeching, and it torments you from within
* Yep, it channels itself into your brain-box, and you're cursed cos ya can't get rid of the sound of it! heehheehee.
I haven't laughed all day and this did it! I hummed at the office once and my boss told me "not give up my day job"............. so now I keep it for the shower.......
Lorna,
A lovely little piece of writing.
" Your voice is my heart"
beautiful
Michael 🙂
Thanks for your nice comment Michael....
She speaks and the sound of her voice
Is so sweet the Birds hush their singing
And the voice I hear falling on my ear
Within my Heart is ringing ...........
Love the sentiment in your Poem Lorna and it mirrors what I feel when I hear Angela's voice on the phone etc when we are separated ~ I melt ! And it is reciprocated whenever he hears mine ! That's the Story of ~ That's the Glory of LOVE ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
Angela is lucky!!!
this is amazing
I'm so happy you liked it Anton...........
You created a beautiful little gem that speaks to me and many others! A lovely write!
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