Lorna

The Sound of You

Your voice is my heart

Do you understand?

I hear it and it pumps my will to live

I hear it and it speaks, not from without

But channels itself from the inside out

Comments9

  • Laura🌻

    Wow, Lorna!
    So powerful and
    heartfelt! The words
    demand to be heard
    and the visual enhances
    the plea! A great write!

    ~Laura~

    • Lorna

      Thanks Laura!

    • Michael Edwards

      Great work Lorna

      • Lorna

        Thanks Michael!

      • Goldfinch60

        Very good write.

        • Lorna

          Glad you liked Goldfinch!

        • orchidee

          A fine write Lorna. You mean the voice of my singing. Erm, it can apply here, if adjusted:
          * You hear it (you hear me singing) and it causes you to lose the will to live
          * You hear it screeching, and it torments you from within
          * Yep, it channels itself into your brain-box, and you're cursed cos ya can't get rid of the sound of it! heehheehee.

          • Lorna

            I haven't laughed all day and this did it! I hummed at the office once and my boss told me "not give up my day job"............. so now I keep it for the shower.......

          • Poetic25

            Lorna,
            A lovely little piece of writing.
            " Your voice is my heart"
            beautiful

            Michael 🙂

            • Lorna

              Thanks for your nice comment Michael....

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              She speaks and the sound of her voice
              Is so sweet the Birds hush their singing
              And the voice I hear falling on my ear
              Within my Heart is ringing ...........

              Love the sentiment in your Poem Lorna and it mirrors what I feel when I hear Angela's voice on the phone etc when we are separated ~ I melt ! And it is reciprocated whenever he hears mine ! That's the Story of ~ That's the Glory of LOVE ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@

              • Lorna

                Angela is lucky!!!

              • antonparker8

                this is amazing

                • Lorna

                  I'm so happy you liked it Anton...........

                • smallest_stars

                  You created a beautiful little gem that speaks to me and many others! A lovely write!

                • Accidental Poet

                  How did I miss this? This is short, but oh so nice. Excellent write Lorna.

                  • Lorna

                    Hi AP.............

                    • Accidental Poet

                      Hi Lorna.............



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