Interlaced.
They were inexplicably drawn.
Shaken by sudden alchemy, total strangers
learned transformation
and reveled in unexplainable destiny.
They then changed from single to duo.
Turned disbelief into attraction, experienced
faraway as a mere whisper
and powerful knowing took them over.
What had been closed swung wide open.
Feeling of déja-vu became invisibly hooked
into unlooked-for start of love
and saw minds set on finding completion.
Dreams of another became close-linked.
Fate's law painted an unexplained oneness
indelibly onto canvas
in serious want of long-time commitment.
Struck then smitten, need was admitted.
Choice of conceding, untroubled by guilt
meant never was will so swiftly
altered to make easier what had begun.
Sighs and dreams begot an amazement.
Passion alighted on two interlaced souls,
proposed clandestine celebration
and on their relationship scribed "Forever"
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A bit of romantic reading to show that love sometimes strikes like this. Hope you enjoy.
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Comments7
Romantic indeed,
my dear Fay!
A beautifully scribed poem enhanced with a fine visual! An enjoyable read! āPassion alighted on two interlaced soulsā...is my favorite line! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
Thank you for your perceptive comment dear Laura - so glad you enjoyed the romantic read.
Interlaced forever! Lovely Fay.... for lovers everywhere!
Yes for lovers who have found something special in unexpected relationships flourishing from a mere whisper. So pleased you enjoyed the poem dear Lorna.
Another masterpiece Fay. Excellent write.
Ah - - am pleased you found hidden treasures in this romantic tribute to those drawn by destiny - -thanks for your comment A.P.
Yes I found it very inspiring Fay. I'm actually thinking of a romantic poem Fay. Will post in a few days after I write it.
A forever fine poem Fay.
Good to know you liked the foreverness of those destiny have interlaced Orchi.
Some enchanted evening
You may see a Stranger
Across a crowded Room .........
It happens FAY and in my memory
sometimes it is the most intense
LOVE ~ I have felt ~ With ANGELA
The first time I saw Her Face ....... !
Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
You got all the meaning from this romantic tribute to those interlaced by destiny Brian - thanks so much for the visit and comment.
Good romantic write Fay, those 'single' went into 'duo' but would eventually combine as a 'single'. That is what love does.
Ah - you hit the right spot with the duo from single and then back again Goldi - glad you enjoyed the romance in the read.
This is so beautiful! Ugh I'm such a hopeless romantic! Well done!
Ditto for being an incurable romantic Jeremy - I too see beauty in those interlaced by destiny's will. Thank you so much for the visit and read and of course for the comment.
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