Stirring.
Descent to despair reaches
darkest of worlds
but as hurt's shadow leaves
fresh urges unfurl.
Hope's stirring climbs, unties
pride's chained reserve
beckons to light held inside
painful failures first
and as sting pales sad mood
lifts with conversion.
Eyes see life becoming good
and minds heal hurt
while self-ascendance risiing
proves the reversal.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Good write Fay.
Good positive write, we will all rise.
hop springs eternal ww
Thanks FAY ~ You have stolen one of my fave MANTRAS "When you really reach rock~bottom the only way is UP ~ AMEN ! You have created a very beautiful Poem from my stark Mantra ~ that is your gift ! Love the you have discovered Julian's Title Backgrounds ~ they are fabulous ! Love your visual ~ Phoenix holding an ATOM (of a specific element) showing the electrons in their quantum orbitals ~ an elegant piece of SCIENCE ! I'm speechless in appreciation ! Yours very impressed BRIAN ! To my eye the ATOM looks like SODIUM which has 11 electrons in four orbitals containing 2 2 6 1 (= 11) electrons. Sodium is a very important element in animal & plant metabolism (as Na+ ions) and of course in Sea Water (2.5% sodium chloride NaCl) ! Perhaps that is why it was chosen ~ imagine Fish & Chips without SALT ! Yours B.
Resurrection sand hope = beautiful write Fay
Very beautiful Fay
Oh so good for the ones with deep depression to remember Fay........ Thank goodness for the "ups".......
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