MY AIM.

Fay Slimm.

 

 

My Aim.

 

From the first finger of misty light
fresh rays from
day's entrance shatter black chains

imperceptibly.

Breeze stirs dark dregs to a finish
as streaks of
summer beget break of new dawn

immaculately

An unsullied azure clearly displays 
mystic zeal
by brushing up bits of stray grey

imposingly.

Sleep flits away to give day space 
and furthers
my aim to unearth fresh challenge

impartially.

Caught in night's shawl is no place
to be when 
sun's call entices taste for outing 

immediately.

 

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 23rd, 2018 04:35
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: Laura🌻.
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Comments7

  • Lorna

    Up and at 'em Fay! I love "caught in night's shawl" - the Spring juices are calling!

    • Fay Slimm.

      Ha - - love this feeling of Spring ousting from bed any poet who hears the enticement. - -thahks a load for the cheery comment dear Lorna.

    • Goldfinch60

      Good uplifting write, uplifting into each day.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Yes each day offers Spring juices for a poet's use thanks for the comment dear Goldie

      • orchidee

        A fine write Fay. Arghh, plunged back into dark mornings soon, when the clocks change? Depends what time we get up! heehee.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Ugh - - I know but it surely will not be long before Spring lightens the mornings too Orchi.

          • orchidee

            Yes, the hour will 'catch up' soon. We shall have lighter evenings anyway to start with! It's all downhill again from June 21st. A minute or two darker each day. Very negative thought there! lol.

          • Michael Edwards

            Super work Fay

            • Fay Slimm.

              My thanks to you Michael - - your comments of support are always so welcome.

            • Christina8

              A wonderful poem! A beautiful write about Spring!

              • Fay Slimm.

                Ah - my sincere thanks dear Christina - so glad you enjoyed the read about Spring.

              • Laura🌻

                I concur with Tepo!
                Another magical write,
                my dear Fay!
                Loved the opening of your write...
                “From the first finger of misty light
                fresh rays from day’s entrance...”
                It reminds me of the first
                breath we breathe in of
                Spring’s fresh air...as in
                your beautiful pic! All she
                has to do is open that
                window abundant with
                sunshine and freshness!

                ~Laura~

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Am delighted you enjoyed the write about Spring and her enticement to poets and artists alike dear friend - thank you so much for your perceptive comment.

                  • Laura🌻

                    You’re very welcome!
                    My pleasure...always!

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    IMPERCEPTIBLY
                    IMMACULATELY
                    IMPOSINGLY
                    IMPARTIALLY
                    IMMEDIATE

                    All these adverbs harbour Spring FAY ~ but they also describe how you pen your daily ODE. I love to comment but alas IMPERFECTLY ! Love the JOY in the picture ~ It is the dorsal view of ANGELA at Daybreak ~ JOY ! Thanks for caring and sharing each day ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      Yes the words chosen do really apply to the joys of Spring dear Brian - - so pleased you enjoyed the picture and poem about the changes this season makes to artists and poets in all walks of life.



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