Gethsemane.

Goldfinch60

Walking into the Garden He asked them to sit.

To sit, to wait, to watch over him.

He walked on, alone, to pray.

“Abba, not what I will, but what you will”.

He knew what was coming,

And knew that it was right for all.

But they knew nothing,

And fell asleep, could not watch over Him.

But were fully awake

As the kiss from the traitor

Betrayed who He was,

And He was taken from them.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 26th, 2018 01:36
  • Comment from author about the poem: A couple of years ago Our Church had set up five Stations of the Cross around the Church, I was asked to write a poem for each Station. This Easter week I am going to put one of them up each day., this is the first.
  • Category: Religion
  • Views: 23
  • Users favorite of this poem: kevin browne, Laura🌻.
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Comments8

  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold. Maybe they would have stayed awake, but their 'flesh' got too tired. Jesus says to them in one (or more?)gospel: 'The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak'.

  • orchidee

    I read recently that Judas needed to kiss Jesus, or give some other indication of who He was, because of Jesus' 'ordinariness', not appearing as a super-saint nor with a halo. The crowd may not have known which one was Jesus otherwise.

    • Goldfinch60

      That was said in our sermon yesterday, he had to be specified to others.

    • orchidee

      Thanks Gold. Well, we had no sermon - ooh! The long readings took up the time.
      And yet to point out a friend (or former friend?) with a kiss was despicable, outrageous, etc.
      Do we have some care and thought for Judas though, later on, when he plunges into the darkness of suicide?

    • Michael Edwards

      First class writing Andy

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Michael. Much appreciated.

      • Lorna

        Great beginning to your Easter offerings!

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Lorna, they are not happy offerings, not until next Sunday anyway.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Lest I forget GETHSEMENE
          Lest I forget Thy Love to me
          Lest I forget thine Agony
          LEAD ME TO CALVARY !

          Thanks for sharing ANDY ~ Holy Week
          Is very special ! I love the STATIONS
          of the Cross and have often participated

          Yours BRIAN

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Brian, they are very meaningful.

        • Laura🌻

          Gold,
          This is a beautiful posting!
          The picture is exquisite and your poem accentuates its profound meaning!

          As a side note, in my Italian dialect “semane” means weeks! I find that very interesting as it being part of the word “Gethsemane”!

          ~Laura~

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Laura.

            As an aside one of my Granddaughters is at University studying French and Italian, next year she will be in Italy for a few months as part of her studies.

            • Laura🌻

              That is great!
              Whereabouts in Italy will she be?



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