MOUNTAIN RANGES
In distance standing
proud before the sinking sun
the mountain ranges
silhouetted glowing warm
In shimmering opal light.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Reduced to shorties as I'm running out of material at the moment - a tanka plus some little primulas which pop up everywhere in the garden.
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Very good tanka Michael, I could see those mountains.
Thanks Andy - I love this form.
A fine shorty, Michael!
Love the colors of those primulas. Your garden must be beautiful with all the different colors...
like a symphony of music...
except yours is a symphony of flowers! Awesome!
~Laura~
Plenty in bloom at the moment - more photos to follow - thanks Laura.
Good shorty and pic Michael. Are the flowers short too - or plenty of them?!
Very short - like shortbread. Cheers O
THANKS MICHAEL ~ love PRIMULAS ~ colour & contour ! Love TANKAS (57577) Haiku & Senryu with attitude ! I have been doing talks on John Denver for Seniors (helps them to recall & remember) and it reminded me of ROCKY MOUNTAIN HIGH and my beloved Colorado in the Fall ! Yours BRIAN
A beautiful tanka! And might I add you are so lucky to have a garden that blooms with flowers!! Still too cold in the U.S. for that. Thanks for the uplifting picture and Tanka!
lovely imagery my friend
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