REALLY DEAD ? Yes really dead !
EVERYONE agreed JESUS was really dead !
SOMEONE ~ called Joseph of Arimethea ~ stepped
UP ~ I've got a TOMB ~ He said ~ JESUS can
RESIDE in that ! OK said the Romans ~ but we
REALISE JESUS is an exceptional person ~ It is
ESSENTIAL that we Seal and Guard the TOMB ! We
CAN'T have his Faithful and Fanatical Followers
TAKING his Body away and claiming He's still alive !
IMPOSSIBLE ~ Nobody will get past the ROMAN GUARD ! BUT
OPEN TOMB ~ Just the shroud ~ JESUS had disappeared !
NOBODY doubted the RESURRECTION ~ hundreds saw HIM ~ AMEN
Thanks for visiting the EMPTY TOMB ~ comments welcome ~ BRIAN
- Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 31st, 2018 02:11
- Category: Reflection
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Comments7
I doubt the RESSURECTION but not the RESURRECTION! heehee. Well, it is a long word in a fine poem and pic Brian. Oh, I'm fussy. A bit of incorrect spelling or grammerr don't matter, such as 'I woz ere'!
Thanks STEVE ~ Pleased you liked ~ have corrected the SPELO ! It's much more embarrassing if you misspell the ACROSTIC ~ then you have to revamp it ! Easter Blessings to you & yours ~BRAIN !
Great piece of writing Brian.
Thanks MIKE ~ I enjoy fitting a "free verse" narrative into an Acrostic ! This one just seemed to flow ~ pleased you appreciated it ! Yours BRIAN
Oh I see, yes - you would have to re-arrange each line, if you put 'RESSURECTION'. Easter seasons greetings too, Brian!
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Una bella poesia della Resurrezione di GesĆ¹ Cristo! Grazie!
A beautiful acrostic!
I enjoyed the read!
My fatherās favorite...Easter!
He was totally involved with the Easter rituals of his Church!
BUONA PASQUA cari Brian ed Angela!
Un Abbraccio e Baci...
~Laura~
GRAZIE LAURA ~ NOSTRA CARA AMICA ~ Si PASQUA e La plus bella tradizzione di la Chiesa molto importante ! In the UK Easter is very important and all the Altars are shrouded in PURPLE until Easter Sunday when we celebrate the RESURRECTION ~ AMEN Grazie per ti commenti ! Baci e Abbracci con amore ANGELA e BRIAN XOXOX
Enjoyed your acrostic very much! Nice header and pic to accompany. Happy Easter to you both! Christina
HAPPY EASTER CHRISTINA ~ Thanks for your comment ~ Love the Headers ~ Julian manages the Site very well ! I love that picture a very manly portrayal of JESUS ~ Easter Hugs ~ Angela & Brain @@@@@@@
He is risen, Alleluia!
AMEN ANDREW ~ He is Risen indeed ~ Yours BRIAN
Andy Please unless you are a reincarnation of my mother or you are my ex-wife in disguise. They were the only ones who called me Andrew.
Thanks ANDY ~ ANDREW is a lovely name and a lovely Bible Character ! As you signed one of your poems ANDREW ~ I thought it was appropriate on EASTER SUNDAY ~ mea culpa ! BRIAN
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