This Wonderful Day.

Goldfinch60



It was a wonderful day,

My lover was back.

Her bubble of dementia

Became hole ridden for the day.

She still spent much time

Within her bubble,

But the woman I love

Spent more time with me.

These days are so rare

Why can’t there be more?

But this was a wonderful day.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 5th, 2018 01:42
  • Comment from author about the poem: A special day, a special tune.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 25
  • Users favorite of this poem: LaurašŸŒ», Lorna
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold. Hope there will be more days, and healing, even in things where it's said 'There's no cure for that'.
    Meanwhile - it was a wonderful day. Then I came along and sang, and ruined it. Oh why did I have to turn up?! heehee.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi, even your singing could not have ruined that day.

    • Michael Edwards

      To live through Orchi's singing it must have been wonderful indeed. Here's to many more of them.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Michael, I do hope so.

      • LaurašŸŒ»

        Andy,
        Two gems...your poem and the musical clip! Absolutely brilliant. I envisioned you and your wife as the couple in the video. This is the best read and visual of the day! Iā€™m thrilled for you! Hopefully thereā€™ll be more magic moments like the one youā€™ve enjoyed! Do you film the moments when ā€œHer bubble of dementiaā€ becomes ā€œhole ridden for the day.ā€?

        ~Laura~

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Laura. I do not film them but I do write about them - they are special.

          • LaurašŸŒ»

            Youā€™re very welcome!
            ...and yes, they are very special!

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanks ANDY ~ love DELIUS ~ Melancholy & Melodious but never Mournful ~ beautiful ! I even put Classic FM on standby while I listened to it @ 9pm ! I can empathise with your poem vicariously because I have Friends whose partners have Alzheimers and some times I go and sit with the Man so his spouse can have a break. We have a conversation of sorts but it is heartbreaking because some of them were intellectuals ~ now it is all on hold ~ till they get to GLORY ~ AMEN You know You and your Beloved are on my Prayer List and it is a Blessing when others (Like LAWLESS) say they are remembering you both ~ at "The Throne of Grace" AMEN. I thank GOD for the many committed Christians on MPS it is a lovely site ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Brian, you are so kind.

            • ron parrish aka wordman

              and you are blessed my friend,have another wonderful day

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you ron, most kind.

              • Lorna

                Of course I know EXACTLY what you mean Andy! It's great when the "he's back" moments arrive.... yesterday he was a comedy act making everyone laugh even if all the words weren't there... we had fun..

                • Goldfinch60

                  That is wonderful Lorna, we can laugh at many things especially ourselves.

                  • Lorna

                    Well he teaches me how to............



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