The Evening of My Life.

Goldfinch60



In the evening of my life

I reflect back.

I see the time of childhood

Where worries did not exist,

Running over the fields with friends

Laughter in our hearts,

Not a care in the world.

I see the teenage years,

Where a man was being created.

Good times, bad times

But I came through untroubled.

I see the working years

Where times were good,

And after forty seven years

Retired unscathed.

I see my married years

Where my love gets stronger each day

With that wonderful lady who said I do

Nearly forty years ago,

She now has her problems

But our love increases each day.

In the evening of my life

I reflect on the now,

And can say it IS a good life,

But best of all,

I am still here.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 6th, 2018 01:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: The second movement of this Beethoven sonata must be what heaven is like.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 29
  • Users favorite of this poem: Lorna, LaurašŸŒ»
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  • Michael Edwards

    I'm fully in empathy with this (except the numbers) - it's a great piece Andy and says so much.

    Oh yes - and I love Beethoven - one of my top three of the greats from the past.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Michael, you have obviously had a good life as well and can look back and be pleased.

      There is a saying that the four composers that are the greatest and should be respected as such are J S Bach, Mozart, Beethoven and your current favourite.

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold. Where do you and I fit in, being millions of years old? Is it our evening too? Well, older than 1066 anyway. lol.

      • Goldfinch60

        We just have a very long evening Orchi, it started in 1215.

        • orchidee

          Did we help King John sign that Magna thing?!

          • Goldfinch60

            Well I did but you mopped up the ink that you had spilt.

            • orchidee

              Doh! I mucked that up too, as well in 1066. Why did I bother to turn up at these events?!

              • Goldfinch60

                They wanted to hear your singing!

              • Lorna

                I'm with you Andy..... life has been good! You're such an optimistic upbeat kind of guy!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Lorna, I am always positive in my life.

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks ANDY for sharing "The Good Life" Godliness with contentment is great gain !" Thanks for the Beethoven Accompaniment ~ real Classical "Soul Music". I'm only one-third through my life (I will be 99 in 2082) and i trust my Life Journey runs as smoothly as Yours ~ thanks for caring ~ BRIAN. Please check MICHIGAN ~ Thanks B.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Brian, may your life run smoothly and for a long time.

                  • Christina8

                    Your poem is inspiring that even though after 18 years and my love still grows that it can still grow after forty years! Thanks for sharing, GF! (andy, if I may)

                    • Goldfinch60

                      That love will never stop growing Christina, it will keep growing for eternity.

                      Of course you may call me Andy.

                    • LaurašŸŒ»

                      Andy,
                      This is a beautiful write enhanced with the perfect musical piece...Beethovenā€™s sonata! Heā€™s one of my favorites! I admire your outlook on life! Your daily dose of positivity is contagious! I enjoyed this read very much!

                      ~Laura~

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you Laura. Much appreciated.



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