On the plain gentle rain
Summer grain wet again.
The Essence, created by Emily Romano is a short,
structured form of two-lines, six syllables each with
an end rhyme and internal rhyme. This one has the
same end rhyme for both.
-
Author:
Michael Edwards (
Offline) - Published: April 9th, 2018 00:27
- Comment from author about the poem: Now it's the turn of the double daffs to come into bloom - here's the first. Plus a little shortie - a form I quite like.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 22
- Users favorite of this poem: Lorna, Lauraš»
Offline)
Comments6
Concise, Poem device, will suffice, very nice.
Nice one D
Join the cause Daveyboyz
loud applause hear the noise.
A fine write and pic M. You sorting out those syllables?! Ms Berles helped me.
Only got 10 fingers - another human design defect!!
Another new type of poem brought into my armoury.
Have a go Andy - nice and short so they don't take up much time.
Hi Michael - Happens that I like short concise poems as well - however while you have very logical patterns you study and stick to, I think in my case it is about short attention span.........
Availability of time to write epics doesn't exist I'm afraid - thanks Lorna.
On your BIKE ~ MIKE
Short SPIKE ~ I LIKE
A SPIKE is a riposte poem !
Thanks for sharing and educating. The recent
Warm weather (65F) has encouraged the
double DAFFS in our town which is now a
Blaze of White & Yellow. Yours BRIAN
Please check today's Poem ~ Ta ~ B.
Yes I've 3 varieties in bloom now along with early tulips - everything is bursting into life.
Michael,
A great pic of your double daffodil! I like your shortie and its name! Thank you for defining what āAn Essenceā is so I donāt have to look it up and be disappointed that I canāt find it! Lol
~Laura~
Thanks Laura
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.