Deception.
Sealed in her childhood's secret dreams
then sprung into flight by vows of love
she abandoned past maidenly leanings
believed his desire and gave him proof.
He though felt the hook of her passion,
looked at the prospects but hid his face,
forged ahead in deception's best fashion
while she left pregnant wept in disgrace.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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This cut deep. A wonderful, thought enriching piece.
Thanks Nicholas - - yes any experience like the one described is so sad and will give much food for thought and thanks for your comment.
The old story! There should be a warning label on some men........
I agree with your suggestion here Lorna - - there is so much thougtless abuse goes by in this greedy generation that I thought the subject needed highlighting. Thanks for your comment my friend.
HI FAY,
THIS IS NOT A WISH GRANTING WORLD
Yes Paul I agree that this world gives hard knocks from those who are determined to have their own way and wishes are lost at such times. Thanks for your thoughts on this saddest of subjects.
lose the hope, but keep the faith.
So cruel and sadly this situation will continue.
Yes Michael - cruel is an apt word to use in circumstances mentioned in the posting - - things of this nature have continued with numbers rising in this unthinking generation.
So sad, these type of man should be ***************ed Enter your own word,!
Yes Goldi - one or two words would suit this type of male - sad but true the numbers are rising where left by such men sadness and shame mar a girl's whole life.
A fine write Fay.
Thank you dear Orchi for the read and the comment on this sad verse.
Such a sad story but very well written. SOME men!! Great job Fay!
An all too familiar scene in many parts of the world in this sick generation and thanks for your views on the piece and its subject dear Christina - Some men as you say need fierce retribution for spoiling young female lives.
Ideally FAY ~ Each child born into this World should enjoy a loving upbringing with its Birth Mother & Genetic Father ! Because MEN don't get Physically Pregnant ~ The Girls they impregnate often end us a Single Parents and have to bear the Responsibility of Child rearing alone without the support of the Father. Worse still they are often driven to choose ABORTION a the most most appropriate answer to a difficult situation ! I am PRO-LIFE Thanks for raising this dilemma which always greatly disadvantages the Female. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
Ideally FAY ~ Each child born into this World should enjoy a loving upbringing with its Birth Mother & Genetic Father ! Because MEN don't get Physically Pregnant ~ The Girls they impregnate often end us a Single Parents and have to bear the Responsibility of Child rearing alone without the support of the Father. Worse still they are often driven to choose ABORTION a the most most appropriate answer to a difficult situation ! I am PRO-LIFE Thanks for raising this dilemma which always greatly disadvantages the Female. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
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