I think of you, I pray for you,
Your birthday is coming up soon
I still want to call you
I'm reminded of you by the simplest tune
In life we didn't always see eye to eye
And for that I have a lot to answer for
But at the end we were so close
And I thank God for opening that door
They say when one door closes another opens
Well, hers closed and I'm still here
Waiting for the next door to open
I feel like my path is still unclear
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 11th, 2018 11:49
- Comment from author about the poem: My mom has been gone for a few years now...
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Comments6
I lost my mum some time ago as well so this means a lot to me - thanks Christina
Glad you liked it Michael! 🙂 Thanks for the read!
A fine write Christina.
Thanks so much orchidee!
Losing a mother can raise much uncertainty of how we may have handled family problems etc - - your honest verse will resonate with lots of readers Christina - - thank you for sharing it.
Thanks so much Fay, I appreciate your response so much!
NICE NOSTALGIC POEM ~ Chris and 5 lovely comments (mine makes 6) from 12 views ! Your poems are always well received ! Angela & I both have our Mums (& Dads) and your Poem has prompted us to care for them more ! I know you will meet your Mum again in Heaven ~ which must give you much Joy also the fact that you were reconciled before She passed over to Glory ! Thanks for sharing a personal episode in your Life. Made us think ! Hugs in he Spirit ~ Sister Angela & Brother Brian @@@@@@@
That's a very short reply from you but I'll take it! LOL Sister Christina
Thanks CHRIS for your riposte ~ sorry it was a little concise. I meant to comment in the elegant structure of your poem which complemented the Structure ! Balanced quatrains with a consistent (xaxa xbxb etc) rhyme pattern ! I was intrigued by the final line ~
I feel like my path is still unclear !
HUGS ~ Hermanos Angela & Brian ~ @@@@@@@
ANGELA and I have been to a Social & Buffet in
Physiotherapy Department tonight ~ One of her
Supervisors is retiring. She works with some very
nice people ! The People we work with day-by-day
makes a big difference to our enjoyment of JOB !
Thanks for the clarification and compliments. Glad you and Angela had a great time tonight!
Very good write, that door is still open as she is still looking down on you with her love.
Thanks so much, Andy, it means a lot!
I loved this, I think she is just on the other side of the door, waiting for you to knock.
Thank you so much laser, for the read. I appreciate your reply!
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