ALL MY OWN

Michael Edwards

 

 

A FEW EDELECTS 

 

Hand shaken

Money taken

Deal done

 

 

Heart sighing

Eyes crying

Love lost

 

 

 

 

I’ve just devised this new form (I call it an Edelect):

3 lines with two words per line

First word in each line is a noun followed by a verb

Line 3 describes an outcome or conclusion of lines 1 & 2

Both words in line 3 start with the same letter

Rhyme pattern aab

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 12th, 2018 00:05
  • Comment from author about the poem: Back to painting - a recent abstract in acrylic.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 49
  • Users favorite of this poem: Nicholas Browning, Laura🌻.
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Comments10

  • Goldfinch60

    Clever writes that work very well.

    • Michael Edwards

      Thanks Andy - easy to do when you have a spare moment.

    • orchidee

      Good writes and pic Michael. I dunno any two-words-per-line hymn-poems. I might waffle less if I did! How's Ms Berles?!

      • Michael Edwards

        Thanks Orchi- she's in the counting house counting out her money.

        • orchidee

          She counting those syllables too? If we get an incorrect number, it can muck up the whole poem!

        • Daveyboyz

          Mind blowing,
          Words flowing,
          Great job.

          • Michael Edwards

            Great stuff Davey - thanks for looking in

          • Fay Slimm.

            Fantastic new form Michael - powerful words - - the abstract reminds me of clean and cold ice - - a treat of a posting and thanks for sharing your work here with us.

            • Michael Edwards

              So pleased you like the form - I have less and less time to write the longer 'serious' stuff so these short forms are ideal. Now off to the studio to take more photos of my recent 'Modigliani' work.

            • Nicholas Browning

              A clever little trick of the hand sir. I like it. We need to find one of these for a ballad. You're changing things for the better around here! Hear that? It's a revolution coming.

              • Michael Edwards

                I'm all for the revolution - would be great if others have a go at this form as they did with the Edone form I posted a while back.

              • Lorna

                Sounds like selling a painting and mourning for its loss...........

                • Michael Edwards

                  Brilliant - yes it does - I do often get very attached to a painting for a variety of reasons (and there is no wall space left indoors) so - yes - it's often so hard parting with them.

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  GIRL WALKING
                  MAN STALKING
                  GAME ON !

                  Nice Form Mike
                  Thanks for sharing !
                  Your BRIAN ~ Please check
                  my Line Dance Form ~ POEM !

                • myself and me

                  Edelect, very interesting format. Love the paint.

                  • Michael Edwards

                    Thanks for looking in - so much appreciated m&m.

                  • Laura🌻

                    Michael,
                    I like this new form of yours...Edelect!
                    A very interesting acrylic!

                    Modigliani...that peeked my interest! Is there a particular style of his that you prefer?

                    ~Laura~

                    • Michael Edwards

                      I went to his exhibition in the Tate Modern in London a couple of months back and was taken by his sculptures of heads - pleased you like the form Laura.

                      • Laura🌻

                        Have you been influenced by any of his paintings?

                      • 2 more comments

                      • Christina8

                        Awesome new poem form! And I love the new abstract!

                        • Michael Edwards

                          So pleased you like it Christina - I'm doing more and more abstract work although I'm not forgetting my watercolours - after all they sell well locally.



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