WERE I to find my Perfect Love
And invite her to lie with me
And seek an unction from above
Would she not then imperfect be ?
A Perfect Love ~ like Hand in Glove
Our Perfect Love for all to see !
For I have searched to whole World through
Were I to find my Perfect love
I ask you ~ what more could I do ?
And seek an unction from above
To thank my GOD for such as YOU
A Perfect Love ~ like Hand in Glove !
There's someone here for everyone
For I have searched the whole World through
I'm asking Lord ~ Where has she gone
I ask you ~ what more could I do ?
To make My Love ~ My only one
To thank my GOD for such as YOU !
This Poem is dedicated to ANGELA ~ My Perfect Love
Thanks for reading ~ comments welcome ~ BRIAN XOX
This poem is presented as a LINE DANCE POEM in
three SEXTETS ! Three lines (1 3 5) dance in sequence
to become lines (2 4 6) in the next Stanza (verse) in
which New Lines (1 3 5) are added. These new lines
dance to become (2 4 6) in the next Stanza ! There is
a basic alternate Rhyme Pattern in each Stanza ~
ababab etc ~ Hope this is clear ! Repetition is very
important in Classical Poetry especially in Love Poetry
to emphasise the message ~ Love to All ~ BRIAN
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Author:
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as a non-line-dancer I will have to read the instructions again but nonetheless a fine write Brian.
I\'ve not got the hang of this. I danced on a line, but fell off. It was a washing line! doh!
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Because the lines (1 3 5) danced to lines (2 4 6) in the next verse ~ I saw them Dancing in Line as in Disney's Fantasia where everything danced ! So I called it a LINE DANCING POEM. This "line movement" happens in Villanelles and other Classic Forms and gives the Poem great Vitality ! Yours BRIAN
A good dance of a poem there Brian - ahh lovely, and I did not swoon! lol.
Thanks STEVE ~ I am the Lord of the Dance and Angela won medals for LATIN Ballroom in her Youth ! I wrote this in a low key ~ especially for Seniors with a low swoon threshold ~ Your NEPHEW ~ BRIAN !
The perfect dance poem for the perfect love.
THANKS M & M ~ Pleased you liked it ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
Very well done in a new structure I have not seen before! I hope Angela liked it! 😉 Wonderful! Hugs in the spirit to you both--Christina
THANKS CHRIS ~ REPETITION is important in poetry ~ especially LOVE POETRY and I always share the Love Poems with ANGELA before I post them ! This form is called LINE MARCH but I call it LINE DANCE because three of the lines in the SEXTET do dance forward (1 3 5) becoming (2 4 6) in the next Stanza ! Hugs in the SPIRIT ~ Angela & Brian @@@@@@@
Good love lorn write Brian. May your Perfect Love go on forever.
THANKS ANDY ~ I like to post Classical poems with Form & Repetition ~ Pleased you liked it ! The phrase "Where has she gone" in verse three is because in MAY ~ Angela is going on an exchange placement to New Zealand with her Flatmate Ruth ! As you know (apart from the Moon !) NZ is about as far away as you can get from Essex ! C'est la Vie ~ Yours BRIAN
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