Canvas blank
Painters prank
Japery justified
Children growing
Parents worrying
Neighbours nervous
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Author:
Laura🌻 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My writing attempt at the new form called EDELECT devised by Michael Edwards! Thank you for your inspiration, Maestro Edwards!
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sometimes it`s hard to come by with all the distractions in life
Ron,
Yes, life can have many distractions! Thank you for your comment and read!
~Laura~
my pleasure laura
CAIO LAURA ~ CARA AMICA MIA ~ WOW two great EDELECTS ~ perfection in both structure & subjects. Punny Painters & Krazy Kids ! NICE ONE ! Baci e Abbracci ~ BRIAN Tuo Amico tutti ! XOX Per favore visite mi Poeme ~ Grazie B !
Grazie Mille Mio Caro Amico!
Thank you for your comments and compliment! Glad you liked the two EDELECTS! Thanks to Michael’s input, I was able to write two of them! I asked for his opinion, and he was very gracious and generous to give it to me!
È Un gran Maestro di arte e di poesie!
Un Abbraccio e Baci...
~Laura~
You cracked it Laura - it's made my day to see these in the gallery - they are not always as easy as they look but being short they don't take the same sustained effort as longer works and they're great fun to write - keep writing.
Thank you for your inspiration, Michael! And you’re right. They’re not that easy to write!
Very good Laura, you have got them down to a tee .
Thank you, Andy! I sincerely appreciate your read and comment!
Fine ede-wotsits Laura. Oh, I can't say these long words, or new-fangled words. I can just about say 'fangled'! heehee.
Orchi,
Thank you for reading my ede-wotsits! Hope you had fun!
~Laura~
Ahhhh Laura - lots of fun! I have to tell you I did see a painting (long time ago) at the Guggenheim Museum (NYC) called "White on White" - really - just white paint on a white canvas - just imagine the pr job they put out for someone to actually pay for that!!! What a joke. Your inspiration is MUCH better......
Thank you, Lorna!
How much do you think my INSPIRATION would go for! 😆
~Laura~
Pots of gold...............
Perfect!
The blank canvas is the scariest of all.
Hello Laura
An inspirational poem on the interesting subject of Inspiration.
We can get inspired anytime, anyplace and anywhere.
Great write.
Keep writing FineB
if you dont object,
I elect to say
I suspect you may
have achieved your
objective....... Neville
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