AS ONE
Fresh pink complexion
long curving neck
dressed to perfection.
At last realised
through probing eyes
love once disguised.
Her future planned
the bells proclaim
throughout the land.
A tricube – one of the simplest of forms to write and
to describe: 3 syllables to each line, 3 lines to
each stanza, and 3 stanzas long. No other rules,
it doesn’t have to rhyme or observe any form
of metre.
However I decided to write this in rhyme
(aba, cdc, efe) – not so easy.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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PHEONOMENAL..all caps..haha
Thanks RJ
Good write Michael. Another form that I had not seen.
I keep digging Andy - cheers.
Good write and pic Michael. I thought you was going to do a 'unaze' thingy, with that title! Here's one, compiled from yesterday between us both. Well it's got three syllables in all - a troisane? heehee.
One
Two
Three
Oh poetic heaven - such a fine piece Orchi - it invites the mind to transcend the upper limits as momentary forms become distorted through emergent and academic practice, and the reader is left with a hymn to the inaccuracies of our era.
Oh yes, I staggered at how perfect that troisane is. Took me hours to write it. A huge tour de force, almost unachievable by any other human being, etc, etc. Now where\'s that humble pie - cut me a large slice!
BAGPIPES I' HAND
PROUDLY AH STAND
RESONATE THRU LAND
Thanks MIKE ~ I'm in Scotia this mornin'
Please check my Poem for picture !
The TRICUBE should be 3 WORDS per line !
Loved the TRICUBE ~ it could be a tribute
to the lovely MEGHAN MARKLE
Yours BRIAN ~ please add to my MUSIC FUSION ~ Ta
Thanks Brian - thankfully rules can always be broken.
One of these days I'm going to conjure up a new type of free verse ballad. When I stop being lazy! Enough about me. This is simply wonderful sir. It gets better every time.
Thanks for the accolade - I'd like to think up another form but the brain is on holiday at the moment.
Love the simplicity - the whole cycle of beauty, love and marriage wrapped up in a few lines....... are your flowers a form of aster?
Bless you Lorna - the flower is anemone Wanda poking up above the blue and pink flowers of pulmonaria.
I got another gem. Another troisane:
Four
Five
Six
Qwww Epic - where do you get your inspiration from?
Oohhh I have to contemplate and meditate for hours on stuff like that - troisanes. Got to get the structure, meaning, layout, syllables, etc all correct. It's not at all easy! heehee.
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Great job on this especially with the rhyme! And as always, love the picture of the flowers!
Thanks for the compliments Christina - In 5minutes time I'll be posting another flower from the garden.
Michael,
A tricube...interesting form!
A super write accentuated by a beautiful pic! I like the colors of the anemone Wanda.
Reading your poems accompanied by your garden flowers, brought to mind Robert Louis Stevenson...āA Garden of Versesā! You should publish a āGarden of flowersā...
a best seller for certain!
Iām enjoying the whole package! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
My pleasure and with different flowers coming into bloom almost daily at this time of year there's more to come. Would love to publish but finding a publisher who is willing to finance the deal is quite a difficult ask these days.
Iāll have to start buying lottery tickets!
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