Sweetie Baby's Invitation (Death)

Lorna



Sweetie Baby!  At my door

You're looking good

Black suits you

 

Don't kiss too close

Your nose is cold

It's not your warmest feature

 

You've got an invitation

In your hand

Which I don't feel like opening

 

I've hurt your feelings?

Oh too bad

You really should have called first

  • Author: Lorna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 20th, 2018 07:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: Pretty silly today.................sorry about the video ..... it just tops things off......... cracked me up..........
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 29
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
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  • onepauly

    you should have called first.
    magnificent!

    • Lorna

      Straight from the heart.........

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      O DEATH ~ where is thy sting
      O GRAVE ~ thy Victory ?
      I triumph still
      If THOU abide with ME ~ AMEN

      Christ has conquered SIN
      and DEATH and HELL
      SO for me ~ When I'm hanging
      by my finger tips and an 800 foot
      drop on an ICE CLIMB in GLENCOE
      In SCOTLAND ~ I think ~ Sudden
      Death ~ Sudden GLORY ~ AMEN !

      That's my take in your Poem LORNA
      Thanks for posting ~ Love as always
      BRIAN ~ Not scared of DEATH ! XOX
      Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B

      • Lorna

        Oh yes definitely - I think dying young during an adventure is by far the best way............ too late............

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks LORNA ~ I'm 35 half way to 70 and half way to PARADISE ~ a good time to go ~ AMEN ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN

          • Lorna

            Yup - had some good horse tosses but none of them got me...... too bad........

          • Michael Edwards

            The video is a treasure - and so is your poem Lorna.

          • Laura🌻

            Lorna,
            A super write! I enjoyed the read! That last line was great!
            The video is awesome! It really made me laugh hard! You’re something else. Love your work and sense of humor!

            ~Love~

          • Goldfinch60

            That video is so funny. Good write as well Lorna.

            • Lorna

              Wouldn't she be fun to have around the house...............



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