Sweetie Baby! At my door
You're looking good
Black suits you
Don't kiss too close
Your nose is cold
It's not your warmest feature
You've got an invitation
In your hand
Which I don't feel like opening
I've hurt your feelings?
Oh too bad
You really should have called first
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you should have called first.
magnificent!
Straight from the heart.........
O DEATH ~ where is thy sting
O GRAVE ~ thy Victory ?
I triumph still
If THOU abide with ME ~ AMEN
Christ has conquered SIN
and DEATH and HELL
SO for me ~ When I'm hanging
by my finger tips and an 800 foot
drop on an ICE CLIMB in GLENCOE
In SCOTLAND ~ I think ~ Sudden
Death ~ Sudden GLORY ~ AMEN !
That's my take in your Poem LORNA
Thanks for posting ~ Love as always
BRIAN ~ Not scared of DEATH ! XOX
Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B
Oh yes definitely - I think dying young during an adventure is by far the best way............ too late............
Thanks LORNA ~ I'm 35 half way to 70 and half way to PARADISE ~ a good time to go ~ AMEN ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
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The video is a treasure - and so is your poem Lorna.
Lorna,
A super write! I enjoyed the read! That last line was great!
The video is awesome! It really made me laugh hard! You’re something else. Love your work and sense of humor!
~Love~
That video is so funny. Good write as well Lorna.
Wouldn't she be fun to have around the house...............
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