Heart's Core.
Living at heart's core,
suchness is love that all
unwanted emotion is freed
from the fear of tearful control.
Looking at love's core,
suchness is heart that all
vision becomes ecstatic and
forgiveness melts veils of mist
.
Loving at heart's core
suchness is spirit that all
life sings with transcendent
light and soul weeps no more.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: April 24th, 2018 03:23
- Comment from author about the poem: A play on words which after tweaking I am posting again - -hope you enjoy.
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Comments7
'Such' a good write Fay! Did you know I would say that?! lol.
When we open our Inner Heart ~ Our Heart's Core ~ to another person it opens "A Gateway into Paradise" which only those who have experienced it understand ! Love the Structure and Sentiment of the Poem ~ Living ~ Looking ~ Loving @ Heart's Core ~ SUCHNESS (perfect word !) is Love ~ Heart ~ Spirit that all ......... Life sings with transcendent light ~ and soul weeps no more ~ AMEN Thanks FAY for a powerful testimony to the infinity of TRUE LOVE ~ Yours Brian & Angela XX Please check my tribute to William & Kate and their New Prince ~ Thanks !
Heart is magical and this is wonderful creation of God in every creature's body to beat with love.
I think you are always living, looking, loving at the heart's core Fay..........
Sweet - perfect words as always Fay.
Very good write, the hearts core is the centre of love.
I love it! It's a great write and I love the repetition at the second line with a twist!
Loving heart's core keeps beauty of hope and life's dignity in each beat as this spreads and receives love. Heart is treasured with memory and beauty of life. Love is treasured in inner core of heart and this is love bank. Soul recognizes own efficiency. Definitely life sings with transcendent light. This poem is an outstanding poem and very heart touching.
Thank you Pintu for this expressive and welcome comment on my piece about heart's core. Your words show that you caught the very essence of the message my poem was trying to bring to readers' - - - humbly received this perceptive comment .
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