Michael Edwards

LIMERICK No54

 

 

A lazy young girl from Berlin

wore knickers that weren’t very thin

and within a few weeks

they stuck to her cheeks

so she put them on outside in.

 

Comments9

  • Goldfinch60

    Good fun Limerick Michael.

    I see the image is now looking in the opposite direction.

    • Michael Edwards

      They work well as a pair looking towards each other - thanks Andy.

    • orchidee

      Ooh swoon heehee! Not a poem about Miss Sue E. Side. I wouldn't like to meet her!

      • Michael Edwards

        Nor her friend who's always up to no good: Miss D. Meanor

      • Fay Slimm.

        I agree that the majority of writing here seems to be an outlet for personal angst - - - but loved the grin your limerick raised as my first read of the morning Michael. - - A smile is a great tonic.

        • Michael Edwards

          thanks Fay - it's a trap your work never falls into - personal angst that is. .

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          I've been to LIMERICK and its a droll as your Poem ! thanks for sharing ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check MINE ~ B ! Love the muted shades in you art ~ very soothing !

        • Lorna

          Fun and funny! At least she didn't put them on the outside of her clothes - I've seen that! But mostly teenage boys....... whatever floats their boats!!! ha ha

          • Michael Edwards

            Teenage boys - On their heads as well ! thanks Lorna

          • orchidee

            BOO!!! Some poets writing on sleepy themes today. Did that wake you?! heehee. And how's Miss Berles?

            • Michael Edwards

              She's stepping out with Ant O'Nym 🙂 🙂

              • orchidee

                Is he Sy O'Nym's brother? (Symon)

              • onepauly

                enjoyed it.
                I do wish people would
                write poetry for poetry sake.

                • Michael Edwards

                  Sadly not many do - thanks for looking in.

                • kitcat

                  Loved it Michael Great poem thought it so funny Brilliant humour Loved the pic too

                • FineB

                  Thank you Michael!

                  That was good! It has cheered me up on this wet and miserable day outside.

                  Keep writing
                  FineB



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