A lazy young girl from Berlin
wore knickers that weren’t very thin
and within a few weeks
they stuck to her cheeks
so she put them on outside in.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I've just been reading poem after poem about personal angst. It seems few contributors write for the pure joy of words and love of poetry but as a therapeutic outlet. Nothing wrong with that but it does get a bit depressing at times. So here's something to break ranks and hopefully raise a smile. Plus another of my monotypes prints.
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Good fun Limerick Michael.
I see the image is now looking in the opposite direction.
They work well as a pair looking towards each other - thanks Andy.
Ooh swoon heehee! Not a poem about Miss Sue E. Side. I wouldn't like to meet her!
Nor her friend who's always up to no good: Miss D. Meanor
I agree that the majority of writing here seems to be an outlet for personal angst - - - but loved the grin your limerick raised as my first read of the morning Michael. - - A smile is a great tonic.
thanks Fay - it's a trap your work never falls into - personal angst that is. .
I've been to LIMERICK and its a droll as your Poem ! thanks for sharing ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check MINE ~ B ! Love the muted shades in you art ~ very soothing !
Thanks Brian - I'm on my way.
Fun and funny! At least she didn't put them on the outside of her clothes - I've seen that! But mostly teenage boys....... whatever floats their boats!!! ha ha
Teenage boys - On their heads as well ! thanks Lorna
BOO!!! Some poets writing on sleepy themes today. Did that wake you?! heehee. And how's Miss Berles?
She's stepping out with Ant O'Nym 🙂 🙂
Is he Sy O'Nym's brother? (Symon)
enjoyed it.
I do wish people would
write poetry for poetry sake.
Sadly not many do - thanks for looking in.
Loved it Michael Great poem thought it so funny Brilliant humour Loved the pic too
Thanks kitcat - you've made my day
Thank you Michael!
That was good! It has cheered me up on this wet and miserable day outside.
Keep writing
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