ONCE HONED

Michael Edwards

 

 

ONCE HONED

 

 

Left behind

the tender bloom

of younger years

and inhibitions

which constrain.

 

The obstacles

when once unlocked

no longer feed

youth’s vanities

and when

the blunted blades

that forge

life’s fate

are honed

they shine

with

new convictions

entertained.

           

 

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  • Goldfinch60

    Those blunted blades when sharpened can cut through the sorrow of life into a glorious future.
    Good write Michael.

  • orchidee

    I'll threaten to sing this! heehee. It reads rather melodically! That will blunt one's blade! A fine write M.

    • Michael Edwards

      Oh no..no..! Not the Orchidee singing ordeal .
      What can I do to remove the melodic structure ?
      Answers on a postcard please.

      • orchidee

        I thought this poem was 'Once Phoned?' Who did you phone once?!

        • Michael Edwards

          Sorry O - I lost the 'P'

          I phoned Cilla Berle but she didn't have it.

          • orchidee

            You phoned E.T? Has he gone home?

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the Violets ~ very Springy ! Thanks for a very thoughtful poem ~ I'm 35 this year so I can look back ~ nostalgically ~ but also forward and your Poem give me hope for the future ! Nice to have a "MICHEAL" to ponder on at work today ! Yours BRIAN

            • Michael Edwards

              Thanks Brian - it's nice to be back after a few days break.

            • Laura🌻

              Hi, Michael! Glad you’re back!
              Andy really honed in to the message conveyed in your poem! A great write and beautiful pic!

              ~Laura~

              • Michael Edwards

                Thanks Laura - I spent a few days in rain drenched Norfolk - beautiful area but boy did we get wet.

                • Laura🌻

                  🦆🦆

                • Lorna

                  Such a great message! You got rained on..... but at least someone else made the bed and cooked the meals! Welcome back.

                  • Michael Edwards

                    Actually we hired a huge converted barn - like something out of a glossy mag - with six bedrooms but we needed them as there were 14 of us - all our children and grandchildren - to celebrate a certain birthday (nuff said!) . Had a great time and all chores were shared.

                    • Lorna

                      Wonderful!

                    • onepauly

                      this one goes on.
                      there is no end.

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      Just caught up with this deep and meaningful write Micheal - sorry hear about you and yours being rained on so much during your break - Norfolk can be beautiful when the sun favours the days - -still you were all together as a happy family and celebrating a special birthday with moments to treasure no doubt - good to have your work back again with this piece which shows such wise perception of time's gift to family elders. Great read.

                      • Michael Edwards

                        Thanks so much Fay - yes we had a great time despite the weather.



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