on writing

onepauly

to write something we can understand

seems to be the task at hand

putting it down on paper

lets look into the caper

finding that which feels right

trying to see it in a different light

easy enough to read

to fullfill a certain need

now that thats been done

we can all have a little fun

Author: onepauly ( Offline)
Published: May 6th, 2018 02:32
Comment from author about the poem: if this was marked on a report card. i'd give it about a c+
Category: Reflection
Views: 20
Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻

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Comments +

BRIAN & ANGELA May 6th, 2018 03:03
Thanks PAULY as Poets ~ Commentators ~ Teachers & Preachers we are all required too WRITE ! Getting it RIGHT is a separate problem !
Yours BRIAN (UK)
Michael Edwards May 6th, 2018 03:56
I reckon a B - nice work Paul.
orchidee May 6th, 2018 07:51
A right fine write there Pauly.
Laura🌻 May 6th, 2018 19:54
No letter grade, Pauly!
A holistic grade is more like it! An excellent write which I enjoyed reading!

~Laura~
- onepaulyMay 7th, 2018 04:15
  sorry,
  i'm old school.
- Laura🌻May 7th, 2018 05:52
  In that case...B+
- onepaulyMay 8th, 2018 21:35
  ha! ha! I'm going to be gone for awhile.
  but I'm coming back.
- Laura🌻May 8th, 2018 21:40
  Stay well. I’ll be looking forward to your future writes! 🙂
- onepaulyMay 8th, 2018 22:18
  I'm going to be away for a while.
  ill be creating good poetry.
  I don't want to just put down words that don't mean anything.
  see ya in a bit. onepauly
Gary Edward Geraci May 6th, 2018 20:39
I love the traditional rhyme work OnePauly and the asymmetry of your 5 couplets. “On Writing” a tradionalist’s delight!
- onepaulyMay 7th, 2018 04:18
  thanks for the positive comment.
  it's not one of my best.
Goldfinch60 May 7th, 2018 00:35
Good write, we all need to write, that need is within us.

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