I know we don't typically argue
but I have my point of view
And it's one you just don't see,
It's vastly important to me
That we're in harmony
I just can't help but worry
I don't want to go to bed mad
over some disagreement we had
It messes with my number one rule
We are getting nowhere fast
I know this argument will not last
I feel like an absolute fool!
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My rule is to never go to bed mad.
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I said earlier against another posting that I get tired reading poems about personal experiences and relationships but there are always exceptions to the rule - and this is sure one of them - great write Christina
Well thank you Michael, I always post whats on my heart.Appreciate the feedback!
THANKS CHRIS ~ or a fine poem of "self resolve" The Good Book advises ! "Don't let the SUN set on your WRATH" or as you say "Don't go to bed arguing" ! Bed is for cuddles ~ not curses ! Unintentionally your poem is shaped like an 8 and that is the Chinese number for prosperity & harmony ! Secondly it's presented in (mainly) Rhyming Couplets again that suggests preciseness and decisiveness. I love the resolve ~
"It's vastly important to me
That we're in harmony"
Angela and I disagree on many minor issues ~ but we always reason together and have never had a real argument yet ! I like to go to London by Train ~ but because they don't run late Angela likes to go by car ~ I prefer Indian Food to Chinese etc ~ but these are only small things and easily resolved ~ usually by consensus ! You are so much in love that any "differences" are easily solved and "cross mode" is replaced by "cuddle mode" ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Abrazos de Hermanos Angela y Brian @@@@@@@
Yes, I know this will be resolved. Thanks so much for your input and I appreciate that! Hugs to you and Angela both!
Yes harmony is worth striving for in any relationship and this verse brings to the fore an excellent aim to never let the day end with anger in the heart - a fine message Christina.
Thanks so much Fay, hopefully I can add a more positive one today!
Good write and very true, you must go to bed in harmony, the last word that my wife and I say to each other as we go to sleep are "I love you" and this has been said every day for 37 years of married life.
Very good advice, and I must say we do too. A more positive poem today! Thanks!
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