I
was
advised to
join this poetry
site called My Poetic Side
to express my feelings of frustration
depression~aggravation~exasperation
facilitation~exhilaration~and gratification
A perfect suggestion from a dear caring friend!
facilitation~exhilaration~and gratification
depression~aggravation~exasperation
to express my feelings of frustration
site called My Poetic Side
join this poetry
advised to
was
I
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Author:
Lauraš» (
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- Comment from author about the poem: After reading Brianās poem BRAVE~NEW~WORLD, a Diamond Morphic Poem ~ with verse reverse, I was inspired to write one of my own.
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Perfect Laura - I love to see the different forms and this so good - which form will you try next ?
Michael,
Thank you for the read and compliment!
Next? Perhaps I will post the Lanturnes.
Maybe we should combine yours with mine as a collaborative work!
~Laura~
Great idea I've never done a collab - I guess we do it via pm's - if you send yours first and I'll follow or shall I send you one?
2 more comments
Good write Laura, great structure.
Thank you, Andy!
I never knew there was so much to express on a poetry site! Well, I suppose I did really. heehee. A fine write Laura.
Erm, a hymn-poem may turn out strange in this form!
Orchi,
Thereās that and much more...Iām sure! Thank you for the visit and compliment!
~Laura~
Hi L! Well to me this form looks like a hot air balloon (the shape - not the words!) and so may it float away all your feelings of frustration! Forever!
Hi, girlfriend! Glad you clarified that āhot air balloonā comment!š¤£
Thank you! The floating has begun and I hope itāll keep floating away! As you said, āForeverā!
Great job and I am glad you took the advice.
Laser,
Iām glad I did too!
Thank you for read and generous comment!
~Laura~
CIAO CARA AMICA ~ Thanks LAURA a perfect diamond ~ because your first verse was a perfect PYRAMID ! Where you surprised that it read sensibly when you reversed it ? I always am but that is how it works ! Well done thanks for trying & sharing ~ loved the message in the POEM as well ! Abbracci e Bacl ~ BRIAN ed Angela XOX
Grazie miei cari amici!
Glad you liked it! It was fun writing it! Sorry for the late response. Iām catching up on responding to comments made!
Abbracci e Baci...
~Laura~
Of this I'm so grateful that you did!
Dan,
My sincere apologies for this late response! I do appreciate your read and your wonderful comment!
~Laura~
I really like this.
nicolibellamont,
Many thanks for the read and your comment!
~Laura~
Thank you Laura.
A wonderful, beautiful and imaginative poem!
I love this Diamond Morphic poem and Diamonds are a girl's best friend!
Keep writing
FineB
FineB,
My sincere apologies for this late response to your great comments! So glad you liked this Diamond Morphic poem! I enjoyed writing it!
~Laura~
Writing especially this one must have been quite cathartic!
Gary,
My sincere apologies for this late response to your comment!
Yes, it was āquite carthatic!ā
Thank you for the read!
~Laura~
no,some great advise
Ron,
My apologies for the late response! Your read and comment is very much appreciated! Thank you!
~Laura~
you`re welcome,,,merry christmas
1 more comment
Beautifully written and I love the format in which you shaped it. Brilliant and rare.
Kevin,
Firstly, my sincere apologies for this late response to your comments!
Secondly, many thanks for your great comments and appreciation for the poem!
~Laura~
I like it Laura.. why not try a heart, club and spade for a full house... x
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