Laura🌻

SOME~GOOD~ADVICE

I

was

advised to

join this poetry 

site called My Poetic Side

to express my feelings of frustration

depression~aggravation~exasperation

facilitation~exhilaration~and gratification

A perfect suggestion from a dear caring friend!

facilitation~exhilaration~and gratification

depression~aggravation~exasperation

to express my feelings of frustration

site called My Poetic Side

join this poetry 

advised to

was

I

Comments14

  • Michael Edwards

    Perfect Laura - I love to see the different forms and this so good - which form will you try next ?

    • Laura🌻

      Michael,
      Thank you for the read and compliment!
      Next? Perhaps I will post the Lanturnes.
      Maybe we should combine yours with mine as a collaborative work!

      ~Laura~

      • Michael Edwards

        Great idea I've never done a collab - I guess we do it via pm's - if you send yours first and I'll follow or shall I send you one?

      • 2 more comments

      • Goldfinch60

        Good write Laura, great structure.

        • Laura🌻

          Thank you, Andy!

        • orchidee

          I never knew there was so much to express on a poetry site! Well, I suppose I did really. heehee. A fine write Laura.
          Erm, a hymn-poem may turn out strange in this form!

          • Laura🌻

            Orchi,
            There’s that and much more...I’m sure! Thank you for the visit and compliment!

            ~Laura~

          • Lorna

            Hi L! Well to me this form looks like a hot air balloon (the shape - not the words!) and so may it float away all your feelings of frustration! Forever!

            • Laura🌻

              Hi, girlfriend! Glad you clarified that “hot air balloon” comment!🤣
              Thank you! The floating has begun and I hope it’ll keep floating away! As you said, “Forever”!

            • Maxine Smith

              Just WOW left speechless. Truly amazing, presentation pulls me in, the words even further.
              Perfection! Well done hunny.

              • Laura🌻

                Maxine,
                Thank you for the read and glowing comments! So glad you liked it! I enjoyed writing it!

                Hugs 🤗
                ~Laura~

                • Maxine Smith

                  Your welcome, your writings are such a pleasure hunny.

                • 1 more comment

                • lasergraph

                  Great job and I am glad you took the advice.

                  • Laura🌻

                    Laser,
                    I’m glad I did too!
                    Thank you for read and generous comment!

                    ~Laura~

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    CIAO CARA AMICA ~ Thanks LAURA a perfect diamond ~ because your first verse was a perfect PYRAMID ! Where you surprised that it read sensibly when you reversed it ? I always am but that is how it works ! Well done thanks for trying & sharing ~ loved the message in the POEM as well ! Abbracci e Bacl ~ BRIAN ed Angela XOX

                    • Laura🌻

                      Grazie miei cari amici!
                      Glad you liked it! It was fun writing it! Sorry for the late response. I’m catching up on responding to comments made!

                      Abbracci e Baci...
                      ~Laura~

                    • Poetic Dan

                      Of this I'm so grateful that you did!

                      • Laura🌻

                        Dan,
                        My sincere apologies for this late response! I do appreciate your read and your wonderful comment!

                        ~Laura~

                      • nicolibellamont

                        I really like this.

                        • Laura🌻

                          nicolibellamont,

                          Many thanks for the read and your comment!

                          ~Laura~

                        • FineB

                          Thank you Laura.

                          A wonderful, beautiful and imaginative poem!

                          I love this Diamond Morphic poem and Diamonds are a girl's best friend!

                          Keep writing
                          FineB

                          • Laura🌻

                            FineB,

                            My sincere apologies for this late response to your great comments! So glad you liked this Diamond Morphic poem! I enjoyed writing it!

                            ~Laura~

                          • Gary Edward Geraci

                            Writing especially this one must have been quite cathartic!

                            • Laura🌻

                              Gary,

                              My sincere apologies for this late response to your comment!
                              Yes, it was “quite carthatic!”
                              Thank you for the read!

                              ~Laura~

                            • ron parrish aka wordman

                              no,some great advise

                              • Laura🌻

                                Ron,

                                My apologies for the late response! Your read and comment is very much appreciated! Thank you!

                                ~Laura~

                                • ron parrish aka wordman

                                  you`re welcome,,,merry christmas

                                • 1 more comment

                                • kevin browne

                                  Beautifully written and I love the format in which you shaped it. Brilliant and rare.

                                  • Laura🌻

                                    Kevin,

                                    Firstly, my sincere apologies for this late response to your comments!
                                    Secondly, many thanks for your great comments and appreciation for the poem!

                                    ~Laura~

                                  • Neville

                                    I like it Laura.. why not try a heart, club and spade for a full house... x



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