THE LOVE OF OUR LIFE and SHE THOUGHT SO TOO !
WHEN WE KISSED WE KNEW WE HAD FOUND
SCENT and SOUND and SAVOUR and
ENLIVENED SIGHT and TOUCH
ALL OUR SENSES WERE
IT WAS A DANCE
WE FIRST MET
THE ~ DAY
RECALL
I
RECALL
THE ~ DAY
WE FIRST MET
IT WAS A DANCE
ALL OUR SENSES WERE
ENLIVENED SIGHT and TOUCH
SCENT and SOUND and SAVOUR and
WHEN WE KISSED WE KNEW WE HAD FOUND
THE LOVE OF OUR LIFE and SHE THOUGHT SO TOO
Thanks for reading ~ hope you enjoyed the Shape and the
Subject ~ comments welcome ~ Love Brian & Angela XOXOX
It really does happen ! Some Enchanted Evening ~ You too
may see a Stranger across a crowded room ...................... !
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 9th, 2018 02:58
- Category: Love
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Comments5
Perfecto ! Great form and yet another great write.
Thanks MIKE ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ~ and found it up to standard ! I am pleased with the way this one reads well ~ backwards & forwards ! Sounds like a dance routine ~ Yours BRIAN & Angela
A fine write Brian. Should I try it? I might swoon! heehee.
Thanks STEVE ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ! Remember I you don't even TRY you never ever SUCCEED ~ And i promise if you saw ANGELA ~ You really would SWOON ! Yours BRIAN
Doh! But I might swoon before I start. Why don't I get my coat and get out more, as they say!
Wonderful art-form top to tail and and back again - and full of reasons to celebrate love. A beautiful read Brian.
THANKS FAY ~ I am so pleased you enjoyed all aspects ! Angela was pleased with it too ~ especially the clip from South Pacific one of her favourite Classic Films ~ Yours ANGELA & BRIAN XOX
An awesome mirror poem---I knew it must've been love at first sight! When you know, you know! Great one Brian. Congratulations and hugs to you both--Christina
THANKS CHRIS ~ On the day we danced together ~ A WALTZ ~ all our senses responded in perfect harmony and still do (especialamente en la noche d'amor !) We were both old enough to have Loved and Lost so we both knew TRUE LOVE when it happened ~ Sight is important initially ~ but (AS YOU KNOW) all the senses are involved in the confirmation of TRUE LOVE ! Pleased you enjoyed the STRUCTURE ~ SUBJECT & SHAPE Abrazos grandes de tus Hermanos ANGELA y BRIAN @@@@@@@
Good write Brian and good format.
THANKS AND\Y ~ Pleased you enjoyed the Structure ~ Subject & Shape ~ Mike & I like to ring the changes to encourage Members to be inventive ! Yours BRIAN
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