BRIAN & ANGELA

LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ A Diablo Morphic Mirror Poem !



 

 

THE LOVE OF OUR LIFE and SHE THOUGHT SO TOO !

WHEN WE KISSED WE KNEW WE HAD FOUND

SCENT and SOUND and SAVOUR and

ENLIVENED SIGHT and TOUCH

ALL OUR SENSES WERE

IT WAS A DANCE

WE FIRST MET

THE ~ DAY

RECALL

I

RECALL

THE ~ DAY

WE FIRST MET

IT WAS A DANCE

ALL OUR SENSES WERE

ENLIVENED SIGHT and TOUCH

SCENT and SOUND and SAVOUR and

WHEN WE KISSED WE KNEW WE HAD FOUND

THE LOVE OF OUR LIFE and SHE THOUGHT SO TOO

 

Thanks for reading ~ hope you enjoyed the Shape and the 

 Subject ~ comments welcome ~ Love Brian & Angela XOXOX

 

It really does happen !  Some Enchanted Evening ~  You too

may see a Stranger across a crowded room ...................... ! 

 

Comments6

  • Michael Edwards

    Perfecto ! Great form and yet another great write.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks MIKE ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ~ and found it up to standard ! I am pleased with the way this one reads well ~ backwards & forwards ! Sounds like a dance routine ~ Yours BRIAN & Angela

    • orchidee

      A fine write Brian. Should I try it? I might swoon! heehee.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks STEVE ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ! Remember I you don't even TRY you never ever SUCCEED ~ And i promise if you saw ANGELA ~ You really would SWOON ! Yours BRIAN

        • orchidee

          Doh! But I might swoon before I start. Why don't I get my coat and get out more, as they say!

        • Fay Slimm.

          Wonderful art-form top to tail and and back again - and full of reasons to celebrate love. A beautiful read Brian.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            THANKS FAY ~ I am so pleased you enjoyed all aspects ! Angela was pleased with it too ~ especially the clip from South Pacific one of her favourite Classic Films ~ Yours ANGELA & BRIAN XOX

          • Maxine Smith

            Wow I love how this is presented, before even reading a word I was drawn to it. A beautiful read too, WELL DONE Brian.

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              THANKS MAXINE as well as STYLE and a SUBJECT a good poem also has SHAPE (dictated by style) My last two poems have been MORPHIC POEMS and therefore written to have a specific GEOMETRICAL SHAPE ~ A Diamond and A Diablo (two inverted pyramids !) Pleased you liked the STYLE ~ SUBJECT & SHAPE ! Try one ~ you should type it out in WORD first to get the shape ~ a simple PYRAMID is the simplest ! Hugs ~ Yours BRIAN

              • Maxine Smith

                Thank you Brian I will be sure to practice some tomorrow and see what I can come up with.

              • Christina8

                An awesome mirror poem---I knew it must've been love at first sight! When you know, you know! Great one Brian. Congratulations and hugs to you both--Christina

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  THANKS CHRIS ~ On the day we danced together ~ A WALTZ ~ all our senses responded in perfect harmony and still do (especialamente en la noche d'amor !) We were both old enough to have Loved and Lost so we both knew TRUE LOVE when it happened ~ Sight is important initially ~ but (AS YOU KNOW) all the senses are involved in the confirmation of TRUE LOVE ! Pleased you enjoyed the STRUCTURE ~ SUBJECT & SHAPE Abrazos grandes de tus Hermanos ANGELA y BRIAN @@@@@@@

                • Goldfinch60

                  Good write Brian and good format.

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    THANKS AND\Y ~ Pleased you enjoyed the Structure ~ Subject & Shape ~ Mike & I like to ring the changes to encourage Members to be inventive ! Yours BRIAN



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