SIX LANTURNES
(A collaboration between Laura and Michael)
A
shower
of incense,
like gentle rain,
soothes.
A
bouquet
of flowers
to wake up your
nose.
Words
written
when exposed
to the hot sun
fade.
Black
liquid
in a well
dip the feather
pen.
Was
Adam
embarrassed
by the autumn
fall?
Eve
always
there to keep
him warm with a
smile.
Six Lanturnes in collaboration. My three contributions have previously been posted and Laura responded to them with three super lanturnes of her own. We put them together and voila!
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: May 11th, 2018 00:26
- Category: Unclassified
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- Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
Comments5
Very good lanturnes the both of you.
Thanks Andy
Thank you, Andy!
Michael is a great inspiration and
collaborator!
Fine lanturnes there. I won't read any poems outdoors on a sunny day then, if they're going to fade away!
And they will. Just like memories - er what did I say?
Orchi,
Read them with Eve...indoors! 😉
~Laura~
Congrats to you both - - a complete success in this interesting form.
Thanks Fay - most of the credit must go to Laura who thought of writing a response to each piece and then joining them into a single work.
Thank you, my dear Fay!
The credit goes all to Michael! He was my inspiration...and best of all, he’s very amenable!...and an awesome collaborator!
~Laura~
Thanks MIKE & LAURA for a perfect Collaboration Poem ~ such fun and such revelation ~ I love the symbiotic richness of collabs ! Both You & Laura are two of my fave Bards on MPS so for me "The WHOLE is greater than the sum of the PARTS" Thanks both ~ BRIAN
thanks for your kind comments Brian
Wow, Brian, your comments are incredible!...and so complimentary! Thank you! Grazie Mio Caro Amico!
Wow you two........ a match made in heaven!
Gor strike a light have to keep my tinders dry - thanks so much Lorna.
?Heaven or MPS?...hmmm...🤔...difficult choice!😇
Lorna,
Michael was the inspiration! The collaboration worked out better than I thought...
thanks to Michael!
~Laura~
Well we were the fortunate ones because of this collaboration....
🤗
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