SIX LANTURNES (In Collaboration with Laura )

Michael Edwards

SIX LANTURNES 

(A collaboration between Laura and Michael)

 

 

A

shower

of incense,

like gentle rain,

soothes.

 

A

bouquet

of flowers

to wake up your

nose.

 

Words 

written

when exposed

to the hot sun

fade.

 

Black 

liquid

in a well

dip the feather 

pen. 

 

Was

Adam

embarrassed

by the autumn 

fall?

 

Eve

always

there to keep

him warm with a

smile.

 

 

 

 

Six Lanturnes in collaboration. My three contributions have previously been posted and Laura responded to them with three super lanturnes of her own. We put them together and voila!

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 11th, 2018 00:26
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Comments5

  • Goldfinch60

    Very good lanturnes the both of you.

    • Michael Edwards

      Thanks Andy

      • Laura🌻

        Thank you, Andy!
        Michael is a great inspiration and
        collaborator!

      • orchidee

        Fine lanturnes there. I won't read any poems outdoors on a sunny day then, if they're going to fade away!

        • Michael Edwards

          And they will. Just like memories - er what did I say?

          • Laura🌻

            Orchi,
            Read them with Eve...indoors! 😉

            ~Laura~

          • Fay Slimm.

            Congrats to you both - - a complete success in this interesting form.

            • Michael Edwards

              Thanks Fay - most of the credit must go to Laura who thought of writing a response to each piece and then joining them into a single work.

              • Laura🌻

                Thank you, my dear Fay!
                The credit goes all to Michael! He was my inspiration...and best of all, he’s very amenable!...and an awesome collaborator!

                ~Laura~

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                Thanks MIKE & LAURA for a perfect Collaboration Poem ~ such fun and such revelation ~ I love the symbiotic richness of collabs ! Both You & Laura are two of my fave Bards on MPS so for me "The WHOLE is greater than the sum of the PARTS" Thanks both ~ BRIAN

                • Michael Edwards

                  thanks for your kind comments Brian

                  • Laura🌻

                    Wow, Brian, your comments are incredible!...and so complimentary! Thank you! Grazie Mio Caro Amico!

                  • Lorna

                    Wow you two........ a match made in heaven!

                    • Michael Edwards

                      Gor strike a light have to keep my tinders dry - thanks so much Lorna.

                      • Laura🌻

                        ?Heaven or MPS?...hmmm...🤔...difficult choice!😇

                        Lorna,
                        Michael was the inspiration! The collaboration worked out better than I thought...
                        thanks to Michael!

                        ~Laura~

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