LONG WHITE CLOUD ~ An Acrostic 4 5 5 Sonnet

BRIAN & ANGELA



 

 

LONG WHITE CLOUD ~ The Land

OF Beauty ~ Peace and Loveliness

NEW ZEALAND ~ Paradise on Earth ~ ANGELA

GONE !  But only for ONE YEAR ~ AMEN !

 

WHY not NEW-CASTLE ? I could .......

Have  easily visited Her every weekend !

I WILL VISIT HER ~ I will fly to HER

TO The Beautiful "Bay of Islands" in August ~ But

EVERY DAY ~ until then ~ I will miss Her !

 

CAN we really exist apart ?  YES OUR

LOVE will be stronger (and we do have SKYPE !)

OUR LOVE will scan  11,500 miles each day ....... 

UNTIL We are together again ~ as ONE forever ~ NEVER

DOUBT The Infinite Power of Our TRUE LOVE ~ AMEN !

 

Thanks for caring ~ comments welcome ~ Angela & Brian XOX

 

AOTEAROA  is the Maori name for New Zealand ~ It means

LAND OF THE LONG WHITE CLOUD and that is the why I've

titled this Poem ~ LONG WHITE CLOUD  and as an Acrostic

it is also a 4 5 5 Sonnet !  The song is the Maori Farewell ~

always sung when we leave in the hope that we will return

again !  It always makes me cry and even more so now ! 

Angela has promised to e-mail me a Poem about NZ each

week which I will try to publish every Wednesday ~ starting

in JUNE so look out for them and send her some very nice

comments ! Blessings & Peace to all ANGELA & BRIAN XOX

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  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 12th, 2018 01:19
  • Category: Love
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  • orchidee

    Aww, when did the 'year' start that you are apart? A fine write Brian.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      TODAY ! Her plane flies at 11:30 via Singapore ! We are OK at the moment tomorrow will be the worst ! Pray for us ~ Love Angela & Brian ~ Just leaving for the AIRPORT !

    • Goldfinch60

      Good loving write Brian, all will be wonderful, Skype will keep you together.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks ANDY ~ I use SKYPE a lot to keep in touch with the WORLD ~ Just leaving for the Airport ~ Pray for us ~ Love ANGELA & BRIAN

      • Michael Edwards

        Hope she has a good flight - at least you will be in constant touch.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          THANKS MICHAEL ~ LONDON to AUCKLAND (11,500 miles) in one day is too much so I advised her to do what we do when flying to OZ or NZ to stop in SINGAPORE for two days ~ so she will arrive in NZ on Wednesday 16 May and will start work (As a Physiotherapist ~ and Ruth as a Radiographer) on Monday 21 May with no jet lag ! NZ is a very civilised & safe Country and A & H are very smart Ladies so I have no worries. Ruth's Uncle is a Hospital Administrator and he arranged the Exchange so they will be well looked after. As you know Mike ~ in this World its not WHAT you know ~ but WHO you know ~ that is important Yours ANGELA & BRIAN !

          • Michael Edwards

            It is indeed who you know but outside of family you have to work at relationships - both friends and contacts have to be earned as I found out early in my career.

          • Laura🌻

            Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
            She’s on her way! Wishing Angela a safe trip! You’ll be very busy SKYPING! Separation is always difficult! However, True Love is stronger!
            Abbracci e Baci per te e per la tua amatissima Angela...
            ~Laura~

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              CIAO LAURA ~ La Nostra Cara Amica ~ Yes GONE but never (for one second) forgotten ! I am sad but happy for the opportunity ANGELA & RUTH are getting for a PAID years work experience in one of the most beautiful & friendly Countries in the World ! I only wish I could be with her but GOD (and RUTH) will watch over her 24/7. They are sharing an apartment together which belongs to the NZ couple who are in Ruth's flat ~ so by JUNE they will have settled in at ~ Work ~ "Home" ~ Church and Recreation ~ GOD rewards those that Love Him ! Grazie Abbracci e Baci con Amore ~ ANGELA e BRIAN XOX

            • Christina8

              Your love is immeasurable! I will be sure to comment on her Wednesday poems. Such a blessing that you get to visit her in August! Prayers-Christina

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                THANKS CHRISTINA ~ For your understanding (as always !) of the situation and with AIR TRAVEL David & I will be able to visit Ruth and Angela in August ~ which is only about 12 weeks away ~ and will pass quick ! We can fly direct by Business Class ~ which is cheaper than a stopover in Singapore ! However we may come back via Hawaii which Dave has never visited ~ I am interested to see the effect of the havoc being reaped by the Volcano ! ANGELA has promised a Poem on Auckland & then The Bay of Islands which is North of Auckland ~ OK. Angela has arrived safe in Singapore and the time is 6:20 am (SUNDAY) so she is still BED catching up on her sleep ~ it is 11:20 pm (Saturday) here (they are 7 hours ahead) if she was in Auckland it would be 10:20 am (Sunday) 11 hours ahead
                and of course it is 6:20 pm in Your State which is 5 hours behind the UK ~ I am sure I will master the TIME ZONES in time ! We only have ONE TIME ZONE in the UK GMT which makes life easier than the USA with its SIX times zones !
                Thanks for you comments ~ I have been running a quiz at the Church tonight with 3 of the Men ~ we had about 50 about punters which raised £200 for the Car Park ~ Do you like quiz nights ? Every Blessing ~ Tus Hermanos ANGELA y BRIAN Hugs @@@@@@@

                • Christina8

                  Glad to hear she is safe!



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