The use we make of the present
determines the outcome of the future
Covered by threatening shadows
we walk in the custom of ghosts.
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Michael Edwards (
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The use we make of the present
determines the outcome of the future
Covered by threatening shadows
we walk in the custom of ghosts.
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Good couplets Michael, especially the first one - when will they ever learn.
When will they indeed - thanks Andy
A fine couple of couplets, and pic M. Have we run out of 'c's now?!
All gone - it's a sad world with no 'c's'
Aww, and I wanted to say more. I will have to say: A fine xouple of xouplets xonveyed with xlarity and no xonfusion and...... now I've run out of 'x's, and the spell-checker's gone into overtime!
There's a surplus of 'b's' at this time of year - you bould use those instead. Mind you they are expensive and you bould get stung.
Thanks MIKE ~ CARPE DIEM ! Brian !
Cheers Brian - cram in all you can!
The couplets are lovely and the pretty little flower world is captivating Michael!
Thanks Lorna - this is a little ajuga - not the best of photos but I'm running out - must get in the garden with the camera.
Ajuga is a great standby! Simple and lovely just when we need it most! And the leaves afterwards are pretty too.........
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The custom of ghosts - a haunting line indeed. Joking apart - very clever phrase.
Mankind's unrelenting obliviousness of the direct result of their actions. History repeats itself because humans never learn. A sad tragic truth of humanity. Pretty flowers. I've never seen those. I'm going to have to start saving your pics. I don't think we have those here.
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