SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY

Michael Edwards

 

 

 

 

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY

 

 

 

At the magical day-end hour

she ascended earthly strife

no more did she live in seclusion

as she ceded the rivers of life.

 

With thoughts of a comfortable nature

assumed with a welcoming sigh

she drank in the streams of heaven

as she swam in a luminous sky.

 

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 15th, 2018 00:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: A white aquilegia breaking into bloom - another plant that seeds everywhere.
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Lorna, Laura🌻
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  • Resa71

    So beautifully written.
    You always capture such a peaceful feeling when you write.
    I’m pretty much the opposite.
    Guess we balance things out 🙂
    Resa

    • Michael Edwards

      Thanks Resa - I guess we do complement each other - perhaps a Collaboration?

      • Resa71

        That would be interesting 😉

      • Goldfinch60

        Another beautiful write Michael.

      • orchidee

        A fine write and pic Michael. She on Cloud Nine now?!

        • Michael Edwards

          Yes cloud 9 - it runs from Stoke Newington.

          • orchidee

            Ahh - not from Clacton?

          • dusk arising

            Transitional beauty here. I'm interpreting this as the passing at the end of life. I hope i have this right because anyone reading this piece with thoughts of the end of their days will surely see the passing over as a time of.magical transition.
            Lovely words.

            • Michael Edwards

              You've read it as intended - thank you so much for your kind comments.

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              Thanks MIKE for a beautiful REQUIEM IN PACE poem ~ My Grandma passed away just like that ~ peacefully ! Love the AQUILEGIA ~ like dancing fairies so delicate ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN. Please check my HAIKU and add an Artist (I will add the picture) to my NEW FUSION ~ thanks BRIAN

              • Michael Edwards

                Thanks Brian - I will add to your Fusion but won't have time until tomorrow.

              • Lorna

                Beautiful death!

                • Michael Edwards

                  Thank you Lorna.
                  And thanks for the save,

                • Christina8

                  Just loved this poem for today! Loved the last two lines, they were my favorite. Great flower pic!

                  • Michael Edwards

                    Thanks Christina - I too like the last two lines - don't know where they came from but wish I could find more like them.

                  • Laura🌻

                    Michael,
                    Today must be one of those days! Yours is the second write that I’ve read about a peaceful death!
                    My dad’s was a peaceful death...3:00a.m. ...8 1/2 years ago!
                    Your exquisite verse beautifully expresses how I felt about my dad’s passing! Well done my friend!
                    Love the pic of the aquilegia! Too bad I’m not allowed to plant flowers at his gravesite! Like you, he loved his garden!

                    ~Laura~

                    • Michael Edwards

                      And my Dad too about 10 years ago - how I miss my parents. Thanks for your kind comments.

                      • Laura🌻

                        You’re very welcome, Michael!

                        My wish is the same for my mom...when her time comes!

                      • orchidee

                        She swimming still?!

                      • SLR

                        This is beautiful. I have different beliefs about the end of someone life but I can still appreciate the beauty, peace and serenity expressed. Beautiful piece.

                        • Michael Edwards

                          Not sure where this came from as I'm an atheist and have no belief in the thereafter but the words seemed to flow when I started writing. Thanks for your comment SLR



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