A COUPLE OF 575s

Michael Edwards

 

Breezes on the shore

Cloud shadows across corn fields

Lazy summer days

 

Distant noises heard

Pulsing hum of street traffic

The heart of the town

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 20th, 2018 00:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: The rare red welsh poppies - I posted the common yellow ones a few days ago.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 29
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
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  • orchidee

    A fine location expressed in this poem, and fine pic too Michael.

  • orchidee

    At they Haikus? Did someone sneeze? Ahh-kooo! Go back to bed Orchi and think up some better jokes! lol.

    • Michael Edwards

      I suppose the first is a haiku as it's about nature but the second isn't so the best way to describe it is 'in haiku format'. Cheers Orchi

    • Goldfinch60

      Two very good 575s, and so true.

    • dusk arising

      I like that, pulsing hum of street traffic, the heart of the town. All the traffic has been driven out of my towns by pedestrianised (horrible word) zones. The hum has indeed become distant.
      Your first piece here though invites me and readily I visualise and feel the sweltering sun and stifling humidity.

      • Michael Edwards

        Still got the traffic in the centre of my local town and more and more houses being built on the outskirts - thankfully I live in a village not far away so we still enjoy the rural idyll - but for how long? Thanks dusk

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        MORNIN' MICHAEL ~ Love non~rhyming 5 7 5 's 17 syllables is just enough to paint a picture ~ love them both ~ also the Red Welsh Poppies ~ elegant ! Please check my Balm in Gilead ~ Thanks BRIAN

      • MrNobody40

        Nice and relaxing. Thank you for sharing

        • Michael Edwards

          Thanks for the compliment and for dropping by.

        • willyweed

          Short and sweet I found myself writing verse in between the lines of this lovely piece. Red poppies reserved for war vets here in USA wonderful work Mike. ww

          • Michael Edwards

            Cheers Willy - my favourite is the blue poppy but not easy to grow .

          • Laura🌻

            Michael,
            A fine write! The second verse is very relatable at the moment! Beautiful red poppies! Enjoyed the read and pic!

            ~Laura~

            • Michael Edwards

              The garden is in full sunshine at the moment and the air is still with not sound to be heard. G&T called for.

              • Laura🌻

                Enjoy your G&T!😊

              • orchidee

                You see my joke? Ahh-kooo?! or you ignored it, it being too corny?! lol

                • Michael Edwards

                  Quite like a bit of hanky panky myself - or at least I did once



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