The Blue Canvas.

Goldfinch60



I look up and see a pale blue canvas,

Just waiting for natures brush

To paint a picture.

High, high above a white line

Is slowly stroked in the blue,

So slowly, as the picture builds

And that one brushstroke widens,

As time passes so slowly.

There to the side the canvas is paler blue,

The dusting of cloud painting the sky

With such a gentle touch,

That the colour is almost invisible.

Nature’s canvas,

Showing the beauty

Of a pale blue joyfulness.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 23rd, 2018 01:26
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just sitting in the garden in the early evening and this is what came to me as I looked at the sky.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 36
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
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  • orchidee

    A lovely write Gold.

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks ANDY for lovely thoughts to start the Middle of the Week ~ just checking my e-mails and MPS in my Coffee Break ! Love STAIRWAY to HEAVEN by LZ ~ very haunting. God is the supreme Artist and the Sky is His dynamic canvas ! I see more things in the clouds than this World dreams of. Thanks for caring & Sharing ~ Yours BRIAN Love your poem ~ beautiful !

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Brian, many people just do not look up, I am glad that you are someone who does.

    • MrNobody40

      Very beautiful. Wonderful imagery. Thanks for sharing

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you nicol, most kind.

      • dusk arising

        Natures canvas repainted exquisitely afresh every day. Long may your eyes capture such beauty for your soul to enjoy.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you da, I too hope my eyes will keep seeing natures world.

        • Michael Edwards

          The sky is an endless source of beauty and forever changing - what more can you ask?

          • Goldfinch60

            Indeed Michael for what more can one ask.

          • Laura🌻

            Andy,
            A beautiful write and pic!
            I enjoyed the serenity of your piece!

            ~Laura~

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Laura, finding serenity is wonderful.

            • Jane Frye

              Beautiful. Made me think of all the times I have stared up at the sky in amazement and in awe.



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