The Moon of Peace.

Goldfinch60



The bright summer evening draws on,

The vivid blue of the sky slowly darkening.

I look up and there in all its glory, the moon

Shining with an almost orange glow.

Its glory shining down on me,

Showing the wonder of the Universe

And bringing peace and happiness

Into my wondrous life.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 29th, 2018 02:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just some words.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks ANDY ~ Love the SONG of the MOON ~ Classical to balance my Country ~ Spanish is my second language so I appreciated the subtitles ! The SCRIPTURES record "And God Created the Moon to shine by NIGHT ~ thank GOD He did it is essential to life on earth ! As a Fellow-Scientist you will appreciate ~ Clue four down (4) Pyrolucitic Orb ! Yours Brian

    • orchidee

      Why don't the sun shine by night, and the moon by day?! I wish I would shut up sometimes. lol. And put that sherry away Orchi!

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Brian, that sing is wonderful.

        • orchidee

          Better than my sing! Then again, so is anyone's! lol.

        • orchidee

          A fine write Gold. I'm gonna be gloomy - *grumbles* 'Ugh, the nights start drawing in, in about 3 weeks time!' But they've not drawn out far enough yet for this year! I dunno what I do want. lol

          • Goldfinch60

            Thanks Orchi, the nights are sill getting shorter and the evenings longer, that is wonderful.

            • orchidee

              Don't worry it won't last, after June 21st! heehee. I should go back to bed if I'm gonna grouch!

            • Michael Edwards

              It's a good life but that's because of what I put into it - hope that doesn't sound smug but you only get out what you put in.

              • Goldfinch60

                Very true Michael but you and I have been putting into life for a very long time and are now reaping the rewards.

              • FineB

                Goldfinch60.

                Thank you that was beautiful.

                Keep writing
                FineB

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you FineB, much appreciated.

                • dusk arising

                  You bring to mind the acceptance of the wonders of existence which we will never understand. With age comes an appreciation of the natural beauty surrounding us.
                  Spiritual peace i think is the message i take from your work here.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you da, yes Spiritual Peace is correct, it is always in my soul.



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