AUTUMN
In rows of narrow window panes
The slowly sinking lingering sun
Reflects its fiery orange hand
As autumns fingers lightly lay
A burnished palette on the land
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: June 1st, 2018 01:47
- Comment from author about the poem: Back to my serious stuff - a short tone poem out of sync with the time of year plus another of my abstracts.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 34
Comments6
A fine write and pic Michael. I'm gonna be gloomy - the nights will be drawing in again in about 3 weeks time! lol.
The shortest day is only six months away - oh sad is me.
We'll be wishing the year - and our lives - away! And does time goes quickly if we're enjoying ourselves? Why, what are we enjoying?!
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Thanks MIKE another very abstract abstact (The Aspens in the Fall @ Colorado ?) and poetic poem ! Autumn is a great muse stirrer ! Yours BRIAN
Thanks Brian - Winter tomorrow.
Wow Micheal I love all the imagery in this, great write!
Aw - thanks skye - much appreciated.
Superb write Michael and another very good abstract.
There really is something about your abstracts that talks to me.
Thanks Andy. Let me know what they say - I might even get to understand them myself lol 🙂
While I'm talking rubbish, others are making fine comments on your poems! heehee. How's Miss Berles these days?
She's gone into farming with Ara Berles.
Super write Michael - every word meaningful. Great read.
Thanks Fay
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