A BROODING PLACE

Michael Edwards

 

 

 

A BROODING PLACE

 

A brooding place where mists hang low

a desperate place for wilting dreams

insensate hopes and black despair

where tortured tongues that cut the air

contend their kin to tethered souls.

 

The chains and fetters once released

in metal tones submerged no more

as views of hills on sloe-black nights

seen through the traceries of leaves

concede to chivalry aroused.

 

 

 

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  • Goldfinch60

    Super write "sloe-black nights" is such a wonderful write.

    Rothko is alive!

  • orchidee

    A fine write and pic Michael. Cooeee - me singing may be cut orf today - some broadband work in our area. See ya when I see ya!

    • Michael Edwards

      Hope it's working okay even though I can't hear your singing !!

      • orchidee

        Cooeeeee - I still got in today, on 'ere! You turned that sound down on me? How's the evening going?

        • Michael Edwards

          Good on yer mate - evening going well - wife cooking Malaysian curry - me already on the wine - probably be too pissed to watch the match tonight but it'll make the result more palatable.

        • Fay Slimm.

          This is a first class write Michael - must put it in my favs for further reads.

          • Michael Edwards

            I feel really flattered - thanks so much Fay

          • Mottakeenur Rehman

            Superb work Sir!

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            WELCOME BACK MIKE ~ We have missed your Philosophy & Artistry ! Love today's monotone Abstract "Forty Grades of Shay" ! I love melancholy poetry very nooooostalgic. I'm still in FOOTY mode while England are still swirling round in the CUP ! Have saved your poem as a FAVE. I have read and marked it ~ it will take time to inwardly digest ! You Friend Brian ~ Football Crazy !

            • Michael Edwards

              Ready to watch tonights game - yes great to be back after a trip to Northumberland.

            • Heartwriter

              Excellent write. Superb!

              • Michael Edwards

                Cheers H - I appreciate your comment.

              • Laura🌻

                Michael,
                Hi! I’ve missed you!
                Happy to see your art again...
                painting and poems!
                I agree with Fay...
                FIRST CLASS!
                You never fail us!
                Kudos

                ~Laura~

                • Michael Edwards

                  Thanks Laura and thanks for the fave - yes I'm back in circulation.

                  • Laura🌻

                    😊

                  • Christina8

                    Excellent write! Have missed your poetry and breathtaking photos---beautiful acrylic!



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