TURTLE & TORTOISE ~ An Acrostic 6 8 Sonnet

BRIAN & ANGELA



 

WATCH THE VIDEO ON THE GIANT TORTOISE ! 

TURTLES BASKING ON A LOG !

 

TURTLES are very funny animals

USUALLY sunning on a log or rock 

REALLY cute a long line of @@@@@

TURTLES Babies to Granddads ~ Turtle Flock !

LOVELY in Status ~ Size & Order

EXCEPTIONAL Swimmers in the water !

 

TORTOISES are quite different

ONLY happy on land ~ they be

REALLY ponderous ~ slow & shy

THEY retreat into SHELL and never play with ME !

ONLY make good pets for GERIATRICS

I ONLY had a Tortoise once ~ not planned

SHE was in'erited from my Uncle .......

ERIC who died with ESMERALDA in 'is 'and !

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX

 

Have you ever had a TURTLE or a TORTOISE (which can 

live for 300 years !) as a pet ? Please tell me about it !

TORTOISES are good pets for Busy People ~ they make

no demands and sleep all WINTER !  My Grandma's like

that her shell is her padded housecoat ! She lives with

My Parents and she is my Dad's  MA - IN - LAW !  ~ He

calls her TILLY the TORTOISE and predicts She will live

for another 200 years !  But we all love Her ~ BRIAN XOX

 

This Poem is presented as a Rhyming 6 8 Acrostic Sonnet.   

 

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 12th, 2018 03:43
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 27
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  • Heartwriter

    I love turtles. They don't respond very much. Lol. Just another wonder to enjoy slowly. Thanks!

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    THANKS HEART ~ Most people like cuddly Pets like cats ~ dogs & bunnies. My Parents have a CAT but I'm in a flat so I can only have a FISH TANK but no turtles ! As you say they are difficult to communicate with ~ You can talk to Dogs & Cats & Parrots etc but not Fish or Turtles ! Please add you favorite HYMN to my FUSION and I will download it from YOU TUBE ~ THANKS ~ Yours BRIAN

  • Michael Edwards

    Great write and love the story about your Grandma

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks MIKE ~ in all my poems & comments (and much of MPS) there is a balance of OBJECTIVITY & SUBJECTIVITY which makes it such an exciting and rewarding SITE. We can meet Ultimate Poetry through FAY and Spiritual Poetry (and zany comments) through STEVE (ORCHII). I write as my MUSE moves me ! Love FUSIONS and have posted on FAVOURITE HYMNS & CAROLS ! We all have (or have had) a ZANY GRANDMA ~ Yours BRIAN

    • orchidee

      A fine write and pic Brian.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        THANKS STEVE ~ T's & T's are amazing animals but unusual PETS ~ pleased you enjoyed it. My latest FUSION is just for you ~ you are asked to select your FAVE HYMN ! Whatever you choose I will (try to) locate it on YOU TUBE ! Yours BRIAN

      • livsxxxx

        Clever write! Really enjoy reading your poems Brian.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks LIVS ~ I always try to Educate ~ Edify ~ Entertain ~ Pleased you enjoy them ! Comments (like yours) makes writing them worth while ~ Yours BRIAN

        • Fay Slimm.

          Your tribute to turtle and tortoise left me with a smile dear Brian - - I love your ending about a well-padded Grandma who is called Tilly the Tortoise - what a caring family you are part of my friend.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanks FAY pleased you enjoyed the Poem 'n Pics ~ I like to entertain ! Grandma's provide a lot of Love & Fun ! I'm glad my parents took her in rather than a CARE HOME. I do visit Care Homes to give them a JIM REEVES etc Sing Along Concert ! Before I start they are contracted into their Housecoats ~ BUT ~ as soon as I PLAY Jim Reeves ~ Nat King Cole ~ Elvis ~ Bing ~ Johnny Cash ~ Sinatra etc the come alive and clap ~ stomp their feet and sing along ~ Wonderful. These BALLAD SINGERS of the 50's & 60's were wonderful ~ it must have been a wonderful era especially coming after WW2. With CD's I can always find the right track at teh push of a BUTTON ! Yours BRIAN ~ I have a New FUSION on Favourite Hymns and ANGELA has posted a lovely MAORI VERSION of "How Great Thou Art" ~ BEAUTIFUL ~ We share a SITE ~ Please visit Thanks B !

          • Christina8

            Love turtles! Have never have one for a pet though. There are no tortoises around here. Great write!

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              THANKS CHRIS ~ Pleased you love TURTLES ~ we don\'t get them in the wild in the UK. They are a bit slow on LAND but sleek and swift in the WATER. When my Friends come from the USA to work or visit they always refer to TORTOISES as TURTLES. I have seen GIANT TORTOISE in ZOOS and THE GALAPOGOS is on our \"TO VISIT\" list ! Thanks for your Poem on my PLACES FUSION ~ I am pleased you\'re Content to be in the Place you\'re in ~ Godliness with contentment is Great gain ! Please add a HYMN to my new FUSION. Angela has posted \"How Great Thou Art\" in MAORI ~ BEAUTIFUL ! Being a Nurse (who understand these things) you will enjoy today\'s Poem ~ BIOCHEMISTRY OF LOVE ~ Enjoy. Have a lovely Day ~ Big Hugs ~ BRIAN & ANGELA @@@@@@@

            • Goldfinch60

              Good fun write Brian. I have never had a tortoise but have had friends who have had them and loved them.



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