Comments received on poems by Carol Coelho
Thoroughness
willyweed said:
you have a style \" kiss me underneath my skin\" I like that line. good work more please!
April 20th, 2017 12:56
willyweed said:
you have a style \" kiss me underneath my skin\" I like that line. good work more please!
April 20th, 2017 12:56
The Heart Song
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CAROL ~ OBRIGADO POR SEU PRIMIERA POEMA ! It is beautiful in structure and compelling in its content. It raises a number of questions about true love which we can also relate to ~ through our own experiences. Heartbeats and the sense of touch are always very important ~ love must arouse all our senses. Can kisses ever be controlled ? Is not love always enigmatic. The meeting of the eyes is always telling and (in my experience) loneliness is a poor excuse for sharing love. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Pleas check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 19th, 2017 15:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CAROL ~ OBRIGADO POR SEU PRIMIERA POEMA ! It is beautiful in structure and compelling in its content. It raises a number of questions about true love which we can also relate to ~ through our own experiences. Heartbeats and the sense of touch are always very important ~ love must arouse all our senses. Can kisses ever be controlled ? Is not love always enigmatic. The meeting of the eyes is always telling and (in my experience) loneliness is a poor excuse for sharing love. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Pleas check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 19th, 2017 15:33
