Comments received on poems by Velvetlascivious



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FredPeyer said:

Very beautifully written! Like the ending.

January 8th, 2018 01:43

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FredPeyer said:

Love the way you lead into it. I can see that place, see the woman. Emotional, tender, introspective. Excellent writing!

January 8th, 2018 01:42

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Heather T said:

This is superb. My second keeper of the day.

July 9th, 2017 12:56

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Louis Gibbs said:

You paint a fine picture herein, with ever so subtle strokes, that held me all the way through and left me satisfied, the way a good poem should. I look forward to more, Velvet.

July 9th, 2017 10:04

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burning-embers said:

Blissful beautiful picture painted by one who\'s poetic brushes tease awe and longing from her reader.

July 9th, 2017 07:24

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks FRIEND ~ this is a very beautiful picture and reflection for Sunday Morning ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN (UK)

July 9th, 2017 03:17

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onepauly said:

the message is comfortable

July 9th, 2017 02:09

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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow deep and dark love like.. Great intense wording. Awesome rhyme scheme too. Kudos.

U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do. I

April 26th, 2017 01:31

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down the rabbithole said:

So well written, loved it... felt taken to another place

April 21st, 2017 16:10

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Garry said:

Very rich.

April 20th, 2017 02:46

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good strong write. Welcome to MPS.

April 20th, 2017 01:29

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Warded Seabee said:

Well done! Easily my favorite read today

April 19th, 2017 21:13

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Quemis said:

10/10




April 19th, 2017 20:05