Comments received on poems by Papi Y



I Miss You (Another Memory)
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 18th, 2017 10:51

I Miss You (Another Memory)
onepauly said:

not sure of yourself.

July 18th, 2017 06:12

Wish You Knew
Papi Y said:

Thanks man, appreciate it. And you hit the nail on the head with alcohol!

July 9th, 2017 22:55

Wish You Knew
FredPeyer said:

Very well written Papi, full of emotion. Has a nice flow to it, you drew me in and kept me hooked. Then the unexpected happened.
On another note: Alcohol is no answer to anything, at first it lifts you, then it depresses you. Easier said than done.

July 8th, 2017 19:44

You Deserve Better
Lizzy Renee said:

Nice Poem :)

May 8th, 2017 07:53

You Deserve Better
Tony36 said:

Great write

May 8th, 2017 06:59

I Loved You (In Another Body)
Lizzy Renee said:

Nice write :)

May 5th, 2017 15:05

I Loved You (In Another Body)
Tony36 said:

Great write

May 5th, 2017 10:25

How I Feel
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

May 2nd, 2017 06:51