Comments received on poems by Mizzy
Chaos in Fairy Town
swingline said:
My early life was devoid of any fairytales which was a grimm reality .
May 11th, 2017 01:27
swingline said:
My early life was devoid of any fairytales which was a grimm reality .
May 11th, 2017 01:27
Emotions
swingline said:
All sounds like a people problem , too many . It used to be people banded together for protection . Now they band together to protest . People used to hug to stay warm . Now they hug with the heater on . People used to shake hands . Now they just want to shake them down .
May 11th, 2017 01:18
swingline said:
All sounds like a people problem , too many . It used to be people banded together for protection . Now they band together to protest . People used to hug to stay warm . Now they hug with the heater on . People used to shake hands . Now they just want to shake them down .
May 11th, 2017 01:18
Forever is over, tomorrows going to suck
swingline said:
Smiling here , reminds me of a song \"Dancing on our graves.\"
May 11th, 2017 01:06
swingline said:
Smiling here , reminds me of a song \"Dancing on our graves.\"
May 11th, 2017 01:06
Emotions
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhh MIZZY ~ You know we love you on MPS. Life can be humdrum but the great value of MPS is that it is an escape into POETRY TIME ! V 3. Cuddles are lovely we all love them and I can send you some. V 4. Keep looking for the SUNSHINE and you will find it ~ you look very ncie and winsome in your picture ! Thinkin\' of you CUDDLES ~ BRIAN
May 9th, 2017 16:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhh MIZZY ~ You know we love you on MPS. Life can be humdrum but the great value of MPS is that it is an escape into POETRY TIME ! V 3. Cuddles are lovely we all love them and I can send you some. V 4. Keep looking for the SUNSHINE and you will find it ~ you look very ncie and winsome in your picture ! Thinkin\' of you CUDDLES ~ BRIAN
May 9th, 2017 16:00
I knew it wasnt true
Mizzy said:
thank you, your comments are very kind and appreciated :)
May 7th, 2017 00:18
Mizzy said:
thank you, your comments are very kind and appreciated :)
May 7th, 2017 00:18
I knew it wasnt true
Michael Edwards said:
Some great lines in this - good write,
May 6th, 2017 23:24
Michael Edwards said:
Some great lines in this - good write,
May 6th, 2017 23:24
I knew it wasnt true
MendedFences27 said:
Freedom? Yes? Sounds like the end of a relationship. Hope all is working out for you. I liked the flow, the rhythm, of your poem and the rhyming, which does not feel forced, which is difficult to do. Well, welcome to MPS and will check out your stuff from time to time. - Phil A.
May 6th, 2017 20:24
MendedFences27 said:
Freedom? Yes? Sounds like the end of a relationship. Hope all is working out for you. I liked the flow, the rhythm, of your poem and the rhyming, which does not feel forced, which is difficult to do. Well, welcome to MPS and will check out your stuff from time to time. - Phil A.
May 6th, 2017 20:24
I knew it wasnt true
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MIZZY ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ very poignant. Sorry you are back were you were 10 years ago ! Still it could be worse ~ you could have gone further down ! Love the last line \"Like trying to dance the nutcracker with a broken leg !\" For most of us MIZZY ~ life does seem like a \"loosing battle\" ~ BUT ~ if we have a \"degree of freedom\" that is a great blessing ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
May 6th, 2017 16:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MIZZY ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ very poignant. Sorry you are back were you were 10 years ago ! Still it could be worse ~ you could have gone further down ! Love the last line \"Like trying to dance the nutcracker with a broken leg !\" For most of us MIZZY ~ life does seem like a \"loosing battle\" ~ BUT ~ if we have a \"degree of freedom\" that is a great blessing ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
May 6th, 2017 16:50
