Comments received on poems by Peekaboopeaches
Welcome to wonderland
Michael Edwards said:
It must be time for tea - enjoyed this.
December 29th, 2017 02:47
Michael Edwards said:
It must be time for tea - enjoyed this.
December 29th, 2017 02:47
Gone to long
Michael Edwards said:
Welcome back ding dong, ding dong.
Welcome back where you belong.
December 28th, 2017 23:03
Michael Edwards said:
Welcome back ding dong, ding dong.
Welcome back where you belong.
December 28th, 2017 23:03
Gone to long
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI PEACHES ~ WE SURE MISSED YOU ~ and your ODD ODES ! Pleased you r back ~ Loved your Poem ~ remember ~ \"We can only learn by or own mistakes ! C\'est La Vie ! HUGS for 2018 ~ Yours as always BRIAN @@@
December 28th, 2017 10:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI PEACHES ~ WE SURE MISSED YOU ~ and your ODD ODES ! Pleased you r back ~ Loved your Poem ~ remember ~ \"We can only learn by or own mistakes ! C\'est La Vie ! HUGS for 2018 ~ Yours as always BRIAN @@@
December 28th, 2017 10:11
While the world sleeps
Peekaboopeaches said:
Thank you for your thoughts i very much appreciate them coming from someone with such talent
December 28th, 2017 05:23
Peekaboopeaches said:
Thank you for your thoughts i very much appreciate them coming from someone with such talent
December 28th, 2017 05:23
While the world sleeps
Adadsy said:
I love the implied meaning by having the whole poem inside a single lengthy stanza. Wish I thought of that! It’s kinda like how sleep paralysis feels like it lasts for hours when I’m reality it’s only a few seconds. Don’t worry too much about grammar when writing poetry. With poetry I find it’s more about getting the artful flow of words and projecting meaning onto them, which I think you’ve done just fine. It’s not so much as about the hard and fast rules of the English language
December 28th, 2017 05:19
Adadsy said:
I love the implied meaning by having the whole poem inside a single lengthy stanza. Wish I thought of that! It’s kinda like how sleep paralysis feels like it lasts for hours when I’m reality it’s only a few seconds. Don’t worry too much about grammar when writing poetry. With poetry I find it’s more about getting the artful flow of words and projecting meaning onto them, which I think you’ve done just fine. It’s not so much as about the hard and fast rules of the English language
December 28th, 2017 05:19
The pen
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhh PEACHES !
What a shock
When a Girl like you
Gets the writer\'s bloc
But drown your sorrow
Better luck TOMORROW !
Your MPS Friend ~ BRIAN
May 20th, 2017 09:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhh PEACHES !
What a shock
When a Girl like you
Gets the writer\'s bloc
But drown your sorrow
Better luck TOMORROW !
Your MPS Friend ~ BRIAN
May 20th, 2017 09:59
Unheard
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing your aching heart PEACHES. You say it best ~ when yiou say nothing at all ! Thinking of you ~ I do understand ! Yours BRIAN
May 19th, 2017 09:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing your aching heart PEACHES. You say it best ~ when yiou say nothing at all ! Thinking of you ~ I do understand ! Yours BRIAN
May 19th, 2017 09:35
While the world sleeps
Goldfinch60 said:
Welcome to MPS. Your write says a great deal. Well done for your first one.
May 18th, 2017 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Welcome to MPS. Your write says a great deal. Well done for your first one.
May 18th, 2017 08:03
While the world sleeps
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME PEACHES (LOVE YOUR PEN NAME !) Thanks for your first poem and comment. It is \"just right\" in length and sentiment ~ lovely ~ more please. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
May 18th, 2017 04:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME PEACHES (LOVE YOUR PEN NAME !) Thanks for your first poem and comment. It is \"just right\" in length and sentiment ~ lovely ~ more please. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
May 18th, 2017 04:24
