Comments received on poems by Peekaboopeaches



Welcome to wonderland
Michael Edwards said:

It must be time for tea - enjoyed this.

December 29th, 2017 02:47

Gone to long
Michael Edwards said:

Welcome back ding dong, ding dong.
Welcome back where you belong.

December 28th, 2017 23:03

Gone to long
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI PEACHES ~ WE SURE MISSED YOU ~ and your ODD ODES ! Pleased you r back ~ Loved your Poem ~ remember ~ \"We can only learn by or own mistakes ! C\'est La Vie ! HUGS for 2018 ~ Yours as always BRIAN @@@

December 28th, 2017 10:11

While the world sleeps
Peekaboopeaches said:

Thank you for your thoughts i very much appreciate them coming from someone with such talent

December 28th, 2017 05:23

While the world sleeps
Adadsy said:

I love the implied meaning by having the whole poem inside a single lengthy stanza. Wish I thought of that! It’s kinda like how sleep paralysis feels like it lasts for hours when I’m reality it’s only a few seconds. Don’t worry too much about grammar when writing poetry. With poetry I find it’s more about getting the artful flow of words and projecting meaning onto them, which I think you’ve done just fine. It’s not so much as about the hard and fast rules of the English language

December 28th, 2017 05:19

Gone to long
orchidee said:

Good write Peek.

December 28th, 2017 04:20

The pen
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhh PEACHES !
What a shock
When a Girl like you
Gets the writer\'s bloc
But drown your sorrow
Better luck TOMORROW !

Your MPS Friend ~ BRIAN



May 20th, 2017 09:59

Unheard
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing your aching heart PEACHES. You say it best ~ when yiou say nothing at all ! Thinking of you ~ I do understand ! Yours BRIAN

May 19th, 2017 09:35

While the world sleeps
Goldfinch60 said:

Welcome to MPS. Your write says a great deal. Well done for your first one.

May 18th, 2017 08:03

While the world sleeps
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME PEACHES (LOVE YOUR PEN NAME !) Thanks for your first poem and comment. It is \"just right\" in length and sentiment ~ lovely ~ more please. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.

May 18th, 2017 04:24