Comments received on poems by grayc8814
I am a computer.
Goldfinch60 said:
Your writing will help to fix you as it takes you into a new world and when you come out of that world each time you will be better.
July 1st, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Your writing will help to fix you as it takes you into a new world and when you come out of that world each time you will be better.
July 1st, 2017 01:10
Value is important
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you are so right,don`t miss it until it`s gone
June 27th, 2017 21:52
ron parrish aka wordman said:
you are so right,don`t miss it until it`s gone
June 27th, 2017 21:52
Who the hell knows
Heather T said:
That is a God-shaped hole that can\'t be quenched by anything else. I can\'t express that any more eloquently than Gary did above. Love to you.
June 26th, 2017 22:40
Heather T said:
That is a God-shaped hole that can\'t be quenched by anything else. I can\'t express that any more eloquently than Gary did above. Love to you.
June 26th, 2017 22:40
Who the hell knows
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The person in your poem seeks God; the existential longing for something apparently elusive; originating from deep within; shared by all of humanity; whether one knows it or not is superfluous. Our Lover wants us to grope...
June 26th, 2017 21:46
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The person in your poem seeks God; the existential longing for something apparently elusive; originating from deep within; shared by all of humanity; whether one knows it or not is superfluous. Our Lover wants us to grope...
June 26th, 2017 21:46
I need you
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Confusion reigns in many relationships.
June 22nd, 2017 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Confusion reigns in many relationships.
June 22nd, 2017 01:40
My Love
Louis Gibbs said:
Welcome to MPS, grayc! Your poem is too beautiful to be distracted from by simple word errors. Swingline corrected one. The other is in the last line... \'never\' should be \'ever\'. Hope you are not put off , you didn\'t ask for editing, but the poem was so near perfection I couldn\'t resist.
June 2nd, 2017 09:55
Louis Gibbs said:
Welcome to MPS, grayc! Your poem is too beautiful to be distracted from by simple word errors. Swingline corrected one. The other is in the last line... \'never\' should be \'ever\'. Hope you are not put off , you didn\'t ask for editing, but the poem was so near perfection I couldn\'t resist.
June 2nd, 2017 09:55
My Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME Friend ~ Thanks for your first poem which allowed you to share your angst ~ I trust you found it CATHARTIC (pain releasing). Life does seem hard and futile at times and we all offer you our support & prayers ! Thinking of you BRIAN (UK)
June 2nd, 2017 04:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME Friend ~ Thanks for your first poem which allowed you to share your angst ~ I trust you found it CATHARTIC (pain releasing). Life does seem hard and futile at times and we all offer you our support & prayers ! Thinking of you BRIAN (UK)
June 2nd, 2017 04:05
My Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, many of us find that expressing our emotions and troubles in words on paper help us. Welcome to MPS.
June 2nd, 2017 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, many of us find that expressing our emotions and troubles in words on paper help us. Welcome to MPS.
June 2nd, 2017 02:06
My Love
swingline said:
That\'s why I took up poetry . To express my pain and isolation on paper when no one else would listen . And I\'m still writing 53 years later . You do good expressing you angst and isolation . Often any questions you have about life can be expressed or worked out in poetry . Bored should be board game and I remember playing board games for days before someone won . And the question on death had been answered in poetry millions of times , maybe billions . It\'s all so Confucius .
June 2nd, 2017 00:49
swingline said:
That\'s why I took up poetry . To express my pain and isolation on paper when no one else would listen . And I\'m still writing 53 years later . You do good expressing you angst and isolation . Often any questions you have about life can be expressed or worked out in poetry . Bored should be board game and I remember playing board games for days before someone won . And the question on death had been answered in poetry millions of times , maybe billions . It\'s all so Confucius .
June 2nd, 2017 00:49
