Comments received on poems by Xxxplicit
Father
Xxxplicit said:
Thak you all for your input and thanks, I appreciate it beyond words.
October 13th, 2017 23:14
Xxxplicit said:
Thak you all for your input and thanks, I appreciate it beyond words.
October 13th, 2017 23:14
Father
Accidental Poet said:
My condolences on the loss of your child. You will be together again.
August 28th, 2017 04:17
Accidental Poet said:
My condolences on the loss of your child. You will be together again.
August 28th, 2017 04:17
Me
myself and me said:
If you can see it, then you can face it. Well written poem.
August 10th, 2017 20:36
myself and me said:
If you can see it, then you can face it. Well written poem.
August 10th, 2017 20:36
cigarette
myself and me said:
She will fade away with time. I would like to light one cigarette, and sit next to you.
Share this quote with you.
“Even though you may want to move forward in your life, you may have one foot on the brakes. In order to be free, we must learn how to let go. Release the hurt. Release the fear. Refuse to entertain your old pain. The energy it takes to hang onto the past is holding you back from a new life. What is it you would let go of today?”
― Mary Manin Morrissey
August 8th, 2017 14:51
myself and me said:
She will fade away with time. I would like to light one cigarette, and sit next to you.
Share this quote with you.
“Even though you may want to move forward in your life, you may have one foot on the brakes. In order to be free, we must learn how to let go. Release the hurt. Release the fear. Refuse to entertain your old pain. The energy it takes to hang onto the past is holding you back from a new life. What is it you would let go of today?”
― Mary Manin Morrissey
August 8th, 2017 14:51
Reflection
burning-embers said:
Great piece of work as is all your stuff.. little bit of advice about finding yourself - honestly, stop looking and accept, soon you\'ll realise what and who you are.
July 27th, 2017 03:42
burning-embers said:
Great piece of work as is all your stuff.. little bit of advice about finding yourself - honestly, stop looking and accept, soon you\'ll realise what and who you are.
July 27th, 2017 03:42
Reflection
burning-embers said:
Great piece of work as is all your stuff.. little bit of advice about finding yourself - honestly, stop looking and accept, soon you\'ll realise what and who you are.
July 27th, 2017 03:33
burning-embers said:
Great piece of work as is all your stuff.. little bit of advice about finding yourself - honestly, stop looking and accept, soon you\'ll realise what and who you are.
July 27th, 2017 03:33
A short letter
burning-embers said:
BIG good on you mister. Do not stop writing your stuff.When that child is wailing thru the night i want to be reading your anguish in here in really bad grammar because you aint gettin no sleep and her indoors is givin it to ya in the neck. BUT changin diapers WILL make a man of you.. and pushin yo litle one in his/her wheeled chariot down the street WILL make a man of you. and i\'m laughing in my socks here.... hey WELL DONE !
July 16th, 2017 15:59
burning-embers said:
BIG good on you mister. Do not stop writing your stuff.When that child is wailing thru the night i want to be reading your anguish in here in really bad grammar because you aint gettin no sleep and her indoors is givin it to ya in the neck. BUT changin diapers WILL make a man of you.. and pushin yo litle one in his/her wheeled chariot down the street WILL make a man of you. and i\'m laughing in my socks here.... hey WELL DONE !
July 16th, 2017 15:59
A short letter
Xxxplicit said:
Thank you all for your support and I\'m glad you all like my writing. 💯✌✌👌👌👍
July 16th, 2017 14:35
Xxxplicit said:
Thank you all for your support and I\'m glad you all like my writing. 💯✌✌👌👌👍
July 16th, 2017 14:35
A short letter
onepauly said:
congradulations! I am so happy for you. who is supposed to give the cigar? I forgot. I hope you don\'t stop posting your poetry. their are plenty of us who want to read your poems. you got what it takes. ill be looking in the list for your next poem. may the force be with you.
onepauly
July 16th, 2017 04:16
onepauly said:
congradulations! I am so happy for you. who is supposed to give the cigar? I forgot. I hope you don\'t stop posting your poetry. their are plenty of us who want to read your poems. you got what it takes. ill be looking in the list for your next poem. may the force be with you.
onepauly
July 16th, 2017 04:16
A short letter
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write. You must always be there for her/him. Children do change your life and you can move forward with pride as each time they do something new it will give you so much pleasure. Congratulations.
July 16th, 2017 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write. You must always be there for her/him. Children do change your life and you can move forward with pride as each time they do something new it will give you so much pleasure. Congratulations.
July 16th, 2017 02:55
My Will, My Life
burning-embers said:
I like this a lot. To say strong isn\'t enough in this genre. Isn\'t enough because you don\'t get wimp rappers or weak gangsta\'s its all in ya face tough attitude. This is powerful and well written (i wish you\'d put bigger spacings between the lines tho). You\'re educating me in this genre. Good one.
July 14th, 2017 03:02
burning-embers said:
I like this a lot. To say strong isn\'t enough in this genre. Isn\'t enough because you don\'t get wimp rappers or weak gangsta\'s its all in ya face tough attitude. This is powerful and well written (i wish you\'d put bigger spacings between the lines tho). You\'re educating me in this genre. Good one.
July 14th, 2017 03:02
Your doubt
onepauly said:
hey hey,
onepauly here, just read this poem. sounds like you have had it rough. me too. some time ago. your writing it out, trying to figure what you can do in these words. I think you will do just fine. I call it soul searching. when something negative happens to me, sometimes I push it aside and count my blessings. I felt blessed when I was writing my poetry. and I do now reading it with others. I don\'t feel as lonely as I used to now I\'m a member of this very wonderful forum. I like things simple and clear. sometimes it gets complicated. I am not without troubles. when I\'m with a lot of people, I feel vunerable, I feel threatened by them. so I stay in my castle most of the time. and even here I feel threatened. neighbors, their just not nice. they want to play games and I don\'t. I\'m a loner, but I\'m not lonely, right now writing this they are rapping on something, and I gotta ignore it? they want to do that because they want to see how much I can take, before I blow up. if I don\'t do anything they will continue. my blood boils. I don\'t know how long it will take till I blow up. I\'m trapped in here. its like a prison. I cant move out because of the rent. its way cheaper here then anywhere else. if I did go to another place it would be almost triple what I\'m paying here. so I try to keep my head up and use patients. this has been going on for years. well I\'m all wrote out.
GOD BLESS onepauly
July 13th, 2017 17:28
onepauly said:
hey hey,
onepauly here, just read this poem. sounds like you have had it rough. me too. some time ago. your writing it out, trying to figure what you can do in these words. I think you will do just fine. I call it soul searching. when something negative happens to me, sometimes I push it aside and count my blessings. I felt blessed when I was writing my poetry. and I do now reading it with others. I don\'t feel as lonely as I used to now I\'m a member of this very wonderful forum. I like things simple and clear. sometimes it gets complicated. I am not without troubles. when I\'m with a lot of people, I feel vunerable, I feel threatened by them. so I stay in my castle most of the time. and even here I feel threatened. neighbors, their just not nice. they want to play games and I don\'t. I\'m a loner, but I\'m not lonely, right now writing this they are rapping on something, and I gotta ignore it? they want to do that because they want to see how much I can take, before I blow up. if I don\'t do anything they will continue. my blood boils. I don\'t know how long it will take till I blow up. I\'m trapped in here. its like a prison. I cant move out because of the rent. its way cheaper here then anywhere else. if I did go to another place it would be almost triple what I\'m paying here. so I try to keep my head up and use patients. this has been going on for years. well I\'m all wrote out.
GOD BLESS onepauly
July 13th, 2017 17:28
Empty
Hopey_xx said:
Yes, you do have the gift of honesty. Emptiness is overwhelming all of the time. Great write, thank you for this, keep writing
July 9th, 2017 13:23
Hopey_xx said:
Yes, you do have the gift of honesty. Emptiness is overwhelming all of the time. Great write, thank you for this, keep writing
July 9th, 2017 13:23
The love I never had
onepauly said:
I was a homeless person so many times I cant count them. i lived in a tent in the woods for two summers with no income except what i could get living off the land. i lived in a city too. and i know what we go through. lots of my friends passed away. i feel abandoned. but i get through it. by keeping busy just doing small things like watching my 1300 dvd\'s also cd\'s. but you read my profile so you already know. i might write a book about my homeless adventures. peace be with you.
July 9th, 2017 09:46
onepauly said:
I was a homeless person so many times I cant count them. i lived in a tent in the woods for two summers with no income except what i could get living off the land. i lived in a city too. and i know what we go through. lots of my friends passed away. i feel abandoned. but i get through it. by keeping busy just doing small things like watching my 1300 dvd\'s also cd\'s. but you read my profile so you already know. i might write a book about my homeless adventures. peace be with you.
July 9th, 2017 09:46
Empty
Seek said:
Just think for a moment, if your death wish is granted, we would not read your powerful and moving emotions. Well written piece. Looking forward to the next one filled with hope. Thanks for sharing.
July 9th, 2017 08:49
Seek said:
Just think for a moment, if your death wish is granted, we would not read your powerful and moving emotions. Well written piece. Looking forward to the next one filled with hope. Thanks for sharing.
July 9th, 2017 08:49
Ballad Of a P.O.S
burning-embers said:
So high on yourself that your lost - what a wicked line. I love this, really strong, never really been into rap but i was doing my best in my head with its pace. You pack so much punch and power, no sloppy sluicey sentiments. Excellent
July 8th, 2017 01:53
burning-embers said:
So high on yourself that your lost - what a wicked line. I love this, really strong, never really been into rap but i was doing my best in my head with its pace. You pack so much punch and power, no sloppy sluicey sentiments. Excellent
July 8th, 2017 01:53
He is from pain
Louis Gibbs said:
I admire your courage as conveyed in this poem, XXX.
If I may make a request of you ... I have a condition which makes my brain spin out when encountering chaos, which bunching your lines together represents to me. I could read your work better, and more often, with a space between the lines. Thanks for considering.
July 7th, 2017 11:09
Louis Gibbs said:
I admire your courage as conveyed in this poem, XXX.
If I may make a request of you ... I have a condition which makes my brain spin out when encountering chaos, which bunching your lines together represents to me. I could read your work better, and more often, with a space between the lines. Thanks for considering.
July 7th, 2017 11:09
Angel
burning-embers said:
Moved me to tears as i know it will others here. Wonderfully written outpouring of love, loss and sorrow.
July 3rd, 2017 05:35
burning-embers said:
Moved me to tears as i know it will others here. Wonderfully written outpouring of love, loss and sorrow.
July 3rd, 2017 05:35
To what do I owe this pain?
Jeff said:
Ive asked that same question all my life man.....nice write
June 26th, 2017 06:39
Jeff said:
Ive asked that same question all my life man.....nice write
June 26th, 2017 06:39
