Comments received on poems by theperksofbeingpoetic
Sunshine and Rainbows
FredPeyer said:
And reading this just made the sunshine come out from behind the clouds and put a rainbow right over my house.
June 30th, 2017 18:15
FredPeyer said:
And reading this just made the sunshine come out from behind the clouds and put a rainbow right over my house.
June 30th, 2017 18:15
Sunshine and Rainbows
trruffin said:
but love is supposed to be silly isn\'t it? I\'m certain it is about rainbows and sunshine and tingly feelings and all out giddiness .. good write
June 30th, 2017 03:59
trruffin said:
but love is supposed to be silly isn\'t it? I\'m certain it is about rainbows and sunshine and tingly feelings and all out giddiness .. good write
June 30th, 2017 03:59
Sunshine and Rainbows
Goldfinch60 said:
May the sunshine always be in your life.
June 30th, 2017 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
May the sunshine always be in your life.
June 30th, 2017 01:41
Memories
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful, well written poem that, to me, kind of fell apart at the last line. Forgive me for critiquing, but you might consider just leaving out that last line. It breaks the rhythm and I believe the poem will stand on its own poignantly without it. You are a fine poet and I look forward to more of your work!
June 29th, 2017 10:25
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful, well written poem that, to me, kind of fell apart at the last line. Forgive me for critiquing, but you might consider just leaving out that last line. It breaks the rhythm and I believe the poem will stand on its own poignantly without it. You are a fine poet and I look forward to more of your work!
June 29th, 2017 10:25
What are the perks of being poetic?
FredPeyer said:
It is true, writing comes with many perks, but you listed a few more. Nicely done!
June 27th, 2017 13:15
FredPeyer said:
It is true, writing comes with many perks, but you listed a few more. Nicely done!
June 27th, 2017 13:15
What are the perks of being poetic?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME IVY ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem ~ In both its Structure (elegant free verse) and Subject ~ The perks of Poetry ! Poetry is very personal (which is why some poets never share it ~ which is sad) ~ But it is also very CATHARTIC and allows us to share and release our inner emotions ~ which is what you have done for us ~ to our mutual benefit ! Poems are our SAFE PLACE ~ so we can lay them OPEN in a caring poetry site like MPS and know they will be cherished and treated with TLC ~ MPS is an awesome site ! All HUMANS are poetic ~ and some (like you) have the confidence to SHARE & CARE ~ that is the essence of MPS ! You really are POETIC ! Please check my ODES and FUSION (SENSES) ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
June 27th, 2017 02:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME IVY ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem ~ In both its Structure (elegant free verse) and Subject ~ The perks of Poetry ! Poetry is very personal (which is why some poets never share it ~ which is sad) ~ But it is also very CATHARTIC and allows us to share and release our inner emotions ~ which is what you have done for us ~ to our mutual benefit ! Poems are our SAFE PLACE ~ so we can lay them OPEN in a caring poetry site like MPS and know they will be cherished and treated with TLC ~ MPS is an awesome site ! All HUMANS are poetic ~ and some (like you) have the confidence to SHARE & CARE ~ that is the essence of MPS ! You really are POETIC ! Please check my ODES and FUSION (SENSES) ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
June 27th, 2017 02:17
