Comments received on poems by Lost in Murphy
Wont come out
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write may your home always be safe.
\"Hello darkness, my old friend
I\'ve come to talk with you again
Because a vision softly creeping
Left its seeds while I was sleeping
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence\"
July 18th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write may your home always be safe.
\"Hello darkness, my old friend
I\'ve come to talk with you again
Because a vision softly creeping
Left its seeds while I was sleeping
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence\"
July 18th, 2017 00:51
Wont come out
FredPeyer said:
There are times when the weather outside is just so bad we don\'t want to go out. Same with the soul, same with the mind. I do like your poem!
July 17th, 2017 16:25
FredPeyer said:
There are times when the weather outside is just so bad we don\'t want to go out. Same with the soul, same with the mind. I do like your poem!
July 17th, 2017 16:25
Wont come out
burning-embers said:
Yes mate. Theres times when we all need emotional austerity. Its self help after all, and sooner or later, tomorrow dawns afresh..
July 17th, 2017 14:19
burning-embers said:
Yes mate. Theres times when we all need emotional austerity. Its self help after all, and sooner or later, tomorrow dawns afresh..
July 17th, 2017 14:19
Manipulator
Goldfinch60 said:
They can normally be seen though and seen for the manipulators that they try to be. Good write.
July 17th, 2017 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
They can normally be seen though and seen for the manipulators that they try to be. Good write.
July 17th, 2017 01:06
Scars and tears and such
FredPeyer said:
Excellent poem, excellent subject, excellent rhyming.
July 15th, 2017 20:57
FredPeyer said:
Excellent poem, excellent subject, excellent rhyming.
July 15th, 2017 20:57
Scars and tears and such
Its Raskolnikov said:
That\'s right, love will conquer all conflicts, internal and external
July 15th, 2017 15:29
Its Raskolnikov said:
That\'s right, love will conquer all conflicts, internal and external
July 15th, 2017 15:29
Long for you
Nicholas Browning said:
This \"Morning scribble\" has the flow that some people take hours to accomplish.
\"For if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird, that cannot fly.\"
Langston said it best.
Keep dreaming friend!
July 10th, 2017 10:40
Nicholas Browning said:
This \"Morning scribble\" has the flow that some people take hours to accomplish.
\"For if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird, that cannot fly.\"
Langston said it best.
Keep dreaming friend!
July 10th, 2017 10:40
Your Move
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but I think you will find that no matter how good a game you play love will always make checkmate.
July 10th, 2017 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but I think you will find that no matter how good a game you play love will always make checkmate.
July 10th, 2017 01:28
Your Move
FredPeyer said:
Lost, I really like the love to chess comparison. But no matter how many moves ahead you plan, on move from the other side can set you back a player, or in the worst case, snatch your king. I love your poem, kind of wish I could have thought of something like this.
Great writing and even greater imagination!
July 10th, 2017 00:06
FredPeyer said:
Lost, I really like the love to chess comparison. But no matter how many moves ahead you plan, on move from the other side can set you back a player, or in the worst case, snatch your king. I love your poem, kind of wish I could have thought of something like this.
Great writing and even greater imagination!
July 10th, 2017 00:06
Your Move
GODisreal said:
That was deep as hell I love it I ain\'t going to lie I feel that
July 9th, 2017 23:37
GODisreal said:
That was deep as hell I love it I ain\'t going to lie I feel that
July 9th, 2017 23:37
Your Move
Louis Gibbs said:
I like the chess analogy. It is my favorite game. Good poem, \'Lost\'!
July 9th, 2017 22:18
Louis Gibbs said:
I like the chess analogy. It is my favorite game. Good poem, \'Lost\'!
July 9th, 2017 22:18
You\\\\\\\'re such a whore
burning-embers said:
We strive to be intellectually strong and creatures of delicate feelings don\'t we. But here you remind us that we, every one of us here, are animals and our basic nature can be brought to the fore by some we meet along our journey. Very brave and strongly (appropriately) presented piece. Good work.
July 5th, 2017 02:29
burning-embers said:
We strive to be intellectually strong and creatures of delicate feelings don\'t we. But here you remind us that we, every one of us here, are animals and our basic nature can be brought to the fore by some we meet along our journey. Very brave and strongly (appropriately) presented piece. Good work.
July 5th, 2017 02:29
You\\\\\\\'re such a whore
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
You\'re feelings are very well known here I see
July 4th, 2017 12:29
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
You\'re feelings are very well known here I see
July 4th, 2017 12:29
The time has come I cant let go
Heather T said:
I can\'t help but think how thankful I am that you are no longer throwing away these bits of you. You\'ve written honestly and simply, and nothing clouds the pain of that day. Beautiful write about a day that no doubt has contributed to who you are.
July 3rd, 2017 23:47
Heather T said:
I can\'t help but think how thankful I am that you are no longer throwing away these bits of you. You\'ve written honestly and simply, and nothing clouds the pain of that day. Beautiful write about a day that no doubt has contributed to who you are.
July 3rd, 2017 23:47
The time has come I cant let go
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful tribute to the love you two shared, and yes, I\'m sure she still is aware of your deep love. Very well expressed poem, Sir!
July 3rd, 2017 20:00
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful tribute to the love you two shared, and yes, I\'m sure she still is aware of your deep love. Very well expressed poem, Sir!
July 3rd, 2017 20:00
Adrift
Lost in Murphy said:
I feel the bonding of a community I wish I had reached out to so long ago. I know you all will inspire and guide me and for that I am eternally grateful. I do feel humbled. Thank you for inviting me in
July 3rd, 2017 07:39
Lost in Murphy said:
I feel the bonding of a community I wish I had reached out to so long ago. I know you all will inspire and guide me and for that I am eternally grateful. I do feel humbled. Thank you for inviting me in
July 3rd, 2017 07:39
Adrift
burning-embers said:
Dont throw away anything now. Keep those unfinished sketches of emotion and return to them when at peace. You\'ll find yourself building upon them. Here i have found like minded souls who welcome my very personal outcry of words. This place will empower you too i\'m sure.
July 3rd, 2017 05:02
burning-embers said:
Dont throw away anything now. Keep those unfinished sketches of emotion and return to them when at peace. You\'ll find yourself building upon them. Here i have found like minded souls who welcome my very personal outcry of words. This place will empower you too i\'m sure.
July 3rd, 2017 05:02
Adrift
Seek said:
For one who claims to be adrift, you seem supremely grounded. Just like you, I am a newcomer to the site and already love it as I\'m sure you do. Great feelings, all laid bare!
July 3rd, 2017 01:32
Seek said:
For one who claims to be adrift, you seem supremely grounded. Just like you, I am a newcomer to the site and already love it as I\'m sure you do. Great feelings, all laid bare!
July 3rd, 2017 01:32
Adrift
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great rhyme and meter for your inaugural night on the water; I don\'t expect you will be adrift for long my friend.
July 2nd, 2017 23:16
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great rhyme and meter for your inaugural night on the water; I don\'t expect you will be adrift for long my friend.
July 2nd, 2017 23:16
Adrift
Heather T said:
My honest thoughts...Your rhymes are fantastic. Gorgeous verses. The only thing that threw me was the form. I just needed a way at first read to tell line from line. Otherwise, this is beautiful. Don\'t you DARE throw another away! Happy to have you.
July 2nd, 2017 19:24
Heather T said:
My honest thoughts...Your rhymes are fantastic. Gorgeous verses. The only thing that threw me was the form. I just needed a way at first read to tell line from line. Otherwise, this is beautiful. Don\'t you DARE throw another away! Happy to have you.
July 2nd, 2017 19:24
